Talk:Classmates (manga)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Link20XX (talk · contribs) 19:40, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

No one has reviewed this nomination and its been here since July 2020 so I will be reviewing this article. I will start soon, but probably not for a day or two. Link20XX (talk) 19:40, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

@Morgan695: I have completed my initial review. Great work overall, I just have some changes that are needed. If I missed something or was incorrect in some way, please offer a correction.

Lead:

• A-1 Pictures just animated the movie, they didn't release it, so maybe something like "that was animated by A-1" would be better

• Replaced with "produced."

Characters:

• The source doesn't say that Masahiro Yamanaka plays that character in the drama CD (at least not that I can find)

• Replaced with an alternate source confirming the role.

Media:

• The source for the Chinese publisher doesn't say that they published it (at least I can't see it, if it is there tell me where it is)

• The publisher appears to no longer exist, so I've removed the mention.

• The Juné sources doesn't give a publish date, just that they published it (if I missed it, tell me where it is)

• I found a source on Barnes and Noble listing the release of the first eBook, but there doesn't appear to be any source listing release dates for the second and third volumes in the series; they aren't even listed on Internet Archive versions of the Digital Manga and June website. The only source listing these dates is Goodreads (1 and 2); even if it was a reliable source, the release dates it lists for other editions of the series are riddled with inaccuracies. I've revised the section to note that Digital Manga has published the series, but did not indicate strict dates; hopefully this is adequate.

• In the Drama CD section, I don't see why the Amazon Japan source is there, since the Oricon source holds the information 1elease and charting information

• Removed the Amazon sources.

• The Amazon pages for the Art book (not deluxe and regular) don't mention a date (if it does I missed it and please correct me)

• Replaced with link confirming release date.

Changes over multiple sections:

• The date formats for the references are DMY, but for the rest of the article the format is MDY. Try picking one of the formats and using that one throughout the entire article.

• Done.

That is all. When they are done/resolved, ping me and I will pass it. Link20XX (talk) 22:43, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

@Link20XX: Hi, response above. Morgan695 (talk) 00:17, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

@Morgan695: I looked through your changes. The Amazon link cited for the deluxe version of the art book still doesn't give the publication date. Also references 14, 18, 25, and 45 still have at least one date in the incorrect format. After those are resolved, the article will be passed. Link20XX (talk) 00:31, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

@Link20XX: Ah sorry, should be fixed now. Morgan695 (talk) 00:36, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

@Morgan695: The changes made are now adequate. The result of this review is Pass. Congratulations! Link20XX (talk) 00:46, 9 January 2021 (UTC)