Talk:Christmas Scandal/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Xtzou (Talk) 18:37, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

Hi, I am reviewing this article and became hung up on this in the plot: "Soon after, Ann is horrified to discover that a news crew secretly followed Dexhart to her home and took a photograph of the meeting, resulting in speculation that Ann is Leslie's lesbian lover." Isn't Dexhart a guy? Why was Dexhart at Ann's home, and why does that show that Ann is Leslies's lesbian lover? (Sorry for being so dense.)

• Not dense at all, I didn't explain it clearly enough. Is it better now? — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
• "who revised his recurring role as Dave Sanderson" - do you mean reprised his recurring role?
  • Yep. I fixed it. — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
• "Commentators said NBC may have been received a boost in the ratings due to repeats on ABC on December 10" - how do repeats increase ratings?
  • I tried to clarify. — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)
• "but was kept together by a number of strong comedic moments and subplot, including the parks department splitting Leslie's work, the April and Andy subplot and the scenes between Leslie and Dave" - could you clarify this?
  • Better? — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

Xtzou (Talk) 19:06, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 19:45, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks, you clarified everything. Nice work. Xtzou (Talk) 19:51, 16 April 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: Pass!

Congratulations! Xtzou (Talk) 19:54, 16 April 2010 (UTC)