Talk:Christine Nelson/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by ToQ100gou in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:11, 22 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

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Concept and casting

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  • Is the hyphen necessary between "provocatively-dressed"?
  • "Of the filming" doesn't sound right. Maybe change "Of" to "On" or "During".

Characterization

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Role in Degrassi

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  • Except for the one in #The_Next_Generation, are the TV screenshots needed?
  • Remove the comma after "were a baby".
  • There's a word missing between "by parents".
  • "withhold a payment" → "withhold payment"
  • Is "day care" two words in British English?
  • "which Spike responds" → "to which Spike responds"

Novelization

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Reception and impact

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  • "story line" → "storyline" (all uses)
  • "14 year-old" → "14-year-old"
  • Remove the comma after "pregnant in real life".
  • "for the Planned Parenthood" → "for Planned Parenthood"

References

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  • The main sections #Episodes and #Sources do not seem necessary. I would merge them all here into subsections as:
==References==
===Citations===
===Episodes===
===Sources===
Done. I didn't think of making subsections! ToQ100gou (talk) 03:29, 28 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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