Talk:Chris Creighton/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Mackensen in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 22:16, 19 October 2020 (UTC)
GA Review edit
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: Pass
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Review edit
Lead edit
- Is there a reference for his DOB?
- Can 2014 season be linked?
Creighton served
please addformally
- Please Wikilink Kenyon College
As the head coach at Wabash in early 2000s
, needs a comma
Early life edit
- Here would be a good place to reference his DOB
- Reference #2 doesn't say his family moved to Seattle
In 1989 Kenyon won a share of the North Coast Athletic Conference (NCAC) title, Kenyon's first and As of 2020 only conference championship.
Why isAs of
capitalized?- Please put commas after stating the year
- Assuming Jake Knott is this Jake Knott please Wikilink his name
- Should athletic hall of fame be capitalised?
Coaching career edit
Concordia and Sweden edit
- Is there any more information on Concordia? (which I at first assumed was Concordia University lol).
- I think it is interesting he was hired via phone without being seen (per ref 8) especially for the time period. Could this be added in?
Manchester edit
- Seeing as he spent four years here, could this not be expanded a bit more?
Ottawa edit
- Please include the website for reference #16
In 2002
add a commawon their first NCAC title, finished undefeated for the first time since 1982, and made the playoffs for the first time since 1977
does this have to be in quotes? Is there not another way to reword this?He was also be named
- do you meanwould also be
?
Drake edit
- Reference #13 doesn't support
On December 22, 2007, Creighton was named the head football coach...
Under Creighton
add a comma
Eastern Michigan edit
English had gone 11–46 over the past five seasons. In his first two seasons, Creighton won only three games
can these be combined into one sentence such asEnglish had gone 11–46 over the past five seasons and Creighton won only three games in his first two seasons.
In 2016
add a commaFollowing the 2018 season
add a commaIn 2019
add a comma- Please define OC since it is being used for the first time
- Mackensen, thanks for the quick fixes. Just ping me when done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 21:46, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
- * @HickoryOughtShirt?4: you're welcome and thank you for undertaking the review. I've addressed all the copyediting stuff, but let me take a few hours to see if I can dig anything further up on Concordia and Manchester. Mackensen (talk) 21:47, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
- * @HickoryOughtShirt?4: back to you. Mackensen (talk) 00:24, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
- Mackensen, I got sick of the US Debate and decided to check into Wikipedia. I am happy witht the changes and am passing this article. Congrats! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:11, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
- HickoryOughtShirt?4, a wise choice I think. Appropriately, I'm watching Arkansas State play Appalachian State. Thank you again for undertaking the review and for your helpful suggestions. Best, Mackensen (talk) 02:20, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
- Mackensen, I got sick of the US Debate and decided to check into Wikipedia. I am happy witht the changes and am passing this article. Congrats! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 02:11, 23 October 2020 (UTC)