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We have updated the entry included information on the three licensed oral cholera vacines and their use in public health programmes.we have made sure that the high quality secondary source is included.

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Welcome. So the issue was that your edit removed a high quality secondary source (a Cochrane review from 2010) "They reduce the risk of death from cholera by 50% in the first year after vaccination.[1]" and replaced it by old primary source including "Sanchez J L, Vasquez B, Beque R et al, Protective efficacy of the oral whole cell / recombinant B subunit cholera vaccine in Peruvian military recruits. Lancet 1994; 344: 1273 – 6."
This is against our referencing policy. Please read WP:MEDRS. Would be happy to discuss further on Wikipedia, by email or by phone. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 09:30, 5 October 2013 (UTC)Reply
I do not get it. Most of the text you have added is not supported by any sources? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 15:10, 7 October 2013 (UTC)Reply
I am going to look at the proposed changes and try to fit some in; I think a history of the development of cholera vaccine could be valuable, though not where it had been placed in the opening sentence. --Synaptophysin (talk) 18:02, 7 October 2013 (UTC)Reply
Yes a section on history may be useful. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:32, 7 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

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  1. ^ Graves PM, Deeks JJ, Demicheli V, Jefferson T (2010). "Vaccines for preventing cholera: killed whole cell or other subunit vaccines (injected)". Cochrane Database Syst Rev (8): CD000974. doi:10.1002/14651858.CD000974.pub2. PMID 20687062.{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (link)

Oral [vaccine intake] section

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The second paragraph has a sentence ending "... antibodies against both the bacterial components and CTB." Probably the acronym means "cholera toxin, subunit B" but that isn't evident. I've linked to the Cholera toxin article. Really the full name would be better than the acronym. Regards, ... PeterEasthope (talk) 14:51, 23 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

References

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Conventional page structure has References at the bottom of the page. When adding a new section, please put it above "References". Thanks, ... PeterEasthope (talk) 14:58, 23 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Azar Andami

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Azar Andami bio claims she invented a vaccine against cholera, cited to a source in Persian. Is it verifiable in English sources? Staszek Lem (talk) 20:29, 26 April 2016 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: Science Communication

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2023 and 10 April 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Armiejane (article contribs).

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Wiki Education assignment: PHMD 2040 Service - Learning Fall 2023

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 31 May 2023 and 29 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): HailML (article contribs).

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Hi, I made some minor changes to the article and added some citations. HailML (talk) 02:58, 3 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
I wasnt sure how to implement a potentially good resource into the article. Please feel free to use the citation in future additions of the article. Cholera – Global situation (who.int). It may be beneficial to add it into the extra resources. HailML (talk) 03:02, 3 May 2024 (UTC)Reply