Talk:Cho Ki-chon/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:14, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:14, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio/dablink/external link troubles
• A few duplinks:

• "liberation of Korea" in Creating model literature in North Korea
• "Rodong Sinmun", "Han Sorya", "Mayakovsky" in Mt. Paektu

• Prose is excellent.
• Call him Cho consistently throughout the article
• Perhaps "Death" should come last in the article

Lead

All good

Life and career

• Begin the article with his full name
• Jo Myeong-hui Who exactly is this?
• Add a few words on what Komosomol was

Works

• some South Korean scholars For example? Also see South Korean scholars have presented two competing views
• Who is Alzo David-West?

Thank you for taking up this review, Sainsf. I believe I have addressed all of the issues raised above (see edit history and summaries). If you have further questions about these improvements, or have new edits to suggest, I'll avail myself to fix them of course. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 22:09, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for all the changes. I am happy to promote this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 05:24, 29 June 2016 (UTC)