Talk:Chloë Sevigny/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 23:18, 1 April 2010 (UTC) OK. Having had a good look at it and a skim read, the article seems like a well written and well structured biography. I have concerns over the images though. 3 of the 5 images are copyright, which probably violates Non-Free content criteria 3a and 8 (minimal use and contextual significance respectively). I don't see any real issues with the content- it's well written and the sources look good. However, you'll need to correct certain fields in the cite templates. I'll pick on #13 to illustrate:

• It's currently:

<ref name="thorn">{{cite news|title=The Girl With A Thorn In Her Side|accessdate=2 March 2010|author=O'Sullivan, Charlotte|date=30 August 2003|publisher=[[The Independent]]|url=http://www.independent.co.uk/arts-entertainment/films/features/the-girl-with-a-thorn-in-her-side-537467.html}}</ref>

• • The Independent is the work, it's published by Independent News and Media so your template should look like
• <ref name="thorn">{{cite news|url=http://www.independent.co.uk/arts-entertainment/films/features/the-girl-with-a-thorn-in-her-side-537467.html|title=The girl with a thorn in her side|last=O'Sullivan|first=Charlotte|date=August 30, 2003|work=[[The Independent]]|publisher=[[Independent News and Media]]|accessdate=1 April 2010}}</ref>
  • The order of the parameters doesn't matter- mine was generated by a tool- it displays the same

The rest of your references are lacking in things like publishers and some are linked, others aren't. If you want to take this back to FAC, and I think you should, the references will need to be consistent. Personally, where a WP article exists, I'd link the work and publisher in every citation. Some are also lacking publication or access dates.

I'm going to pass the GA review and leave those suggestions to be fixed in preparation for FAC. I recommend you put the article up for peer review t get some more opinions and feedback before submitting to FAC. If you need me to clarify anything, I'm reachable on my talk page! HJ Mitchell | April Fool! 23:18, 1 April 2010 (UTC)