Talk:Chinese ironclad Zhenyuan/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by CPA-5 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 14:01, 3 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


Claim my seat. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:01, 3 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • Zhenyuan (Chinese: 鎮遠; Wade-Giles: Chen Yuen) Unlink Chinese.
    • I don't think I can without also removing the link to Wade-Giles, which I think is useful since almost no one will know what that means - I do, because I had a minor in modern Chinese history for my MA, but that's not exactly the norm
  • @Parsecboy: Hmm by MOS:OVERLINK Chinese should be unlinked however the Wade-Giles's link shouldn't be removed, though it has a big connexion with Chinese and has a really useful reason to be linked. I personally don't think it would harm if we let it stay linked or unlinked; it's not like Wikipedia is dying or the article wouldn't pass GAN because of one really common language is still linked. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 14:02, 9 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • them the most powerful warships in East Asian waters at the time Unlink East Asian.
    • Done
  • She also supported the invasion of Sakhalin in July 1905 the invasion is a proper noun?
    • Capitalized
  • Pipe Germany to the German Empire.
    • Done
  • Upon her acquisition by Japan in 1895 Pipe Japan to the Empire of Japan.
    • Done
  • Two more of the guns were installed abreast of the main What kind of guns?
    • The same 6-inch QF guns
  • Nagasaki Incident vs Nagasaki incident
    • Fixed
  • Finding no enemy vessels, he took the fleet to Weihaiwei Modern-day Weihai?
    • Done
  • across the Bohai Strait to Weihaiwei on 20 October Unlink Weihaiwei and the link the sentence above this one.
    • Done
  • into the harbor on the night of 4–5 February and torpedoed Dingyuan --> "into the harbor on the night of 4/5 February and torpedoed Dingyuan"
    • Done
  • Where exactly operated she during her training period? In Japan itself, Korea or Taiwan?
    • Feng doesn't say - I'd assume in home waters, but I can't say for sure.
  • to be preserved in Ueno Park in Tokyo as a monument Unlink Tokyo.
    • Done
  • Shanghai is overlinked.
    • Fixed
  • to the Military Museum of the Chinese People's Revolution in Beijing Unlink Beijing.
    • Done

Images

  • How is "File:Chen Yuen.tif" copy-right free? How do we know it was taken by US Navy personnel?
    • Corrected the template - we don't know that it was US personnel (though it might well have been) - personally, it seems more likely to have been a Japanese photographer, but we don't know for sure.

Infobox

  • No rename date?

Sources

  • Paine, Lincoln --> Paine, Lincoln P.
    • Done
  • The Chinese Steam Navy --> "The Chinese Steam Navy 1862–1945
    • Done

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 11:03, 5 January 2020 (UTC)Reply