Talk:Child Rights Act in Nigeria

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 January 2020 and 16 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cassitymega.

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Cassitymega, regarding this and this, there are issues with you edits. For example, WP:Tone issues. That stated, I'm not going to revert again. Flyer22 Frozen (talk) 00:24, 13 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

The tone isn't that bad, though. Regarding this? References aren't placed like that. They should be after a sentence or paragraph. Flyer22 Frozen (talk) 00:27, 13 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi @Flyer22Frozen I made the edits on the references like you suggested. I also edited the piece for tone and made some adjustments. With respect to the original authors, I believe my edits are a significant improvement upon the original entry. The sources, with the exception of the article on activists, are all academic or from government documents and all have working links. Cassitymega (talk) 00:52, 13 May 2020 (UTC)Reply