Talk:Chief Administrative Officer of the United States House of Representatives

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Rgrayuk in topic Redundancy in opening paragraph

Why is state relevant? edit

Why is the state or territory they come from relevant? More specifically, relevant enough to be included in the table. Kevink707 (talk) 16:13, 7 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

Redundancy in opening paragraph edit

The article opens thus:

"Chief Administrative Officer of the United States House of Representatives (CAO) is the chief administrative officer of the United States House of Representatives…"

This is surely redundant to an almost comical degree. I suggest that it would be better to rephrase, for example along the following lines:

"The Chief Administrative Officer of the United States House of Representatives (CAO) is a senior officer of the United States House of Representatives tasked with carrying out administrative functions for the House, including human resources, information resources, payroll, finance, procurement, and other business services."

Rgrayuk (talk) 09:21, 17 December 2020 (UTC)Reply