Talk:Cheekwood Botanical Garden and Museum of Art

Latest comment: 14 years ago by 64.134.188.22 in topic Tone of an Advertisement

Tone of an Advertisement

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The article reads like an advertisement rather than an encyclopedia article. Suggest change in tone throughout the article--particularly in the latter half. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.134.188.22 (talk) 01:48, 6 September 2010 (UTC)Reply