Talk:Charmbracelet/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 12:17, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

General

• 10 Dead links
• There's a redirect which needs unlinking

Info box

• Just write (exec)

Background

• "Carey's $100 million dollar recording contract was bought out by Virgin Records, who paid her $28 million to leave Columbia." → If she had already left Columbia and was with Virgin, why did Virgin pay her to leave Columbia??

Development and recording

• "Carey saidp]] "Boy (I Need You)" was one of her favorites on the album." → Where is the source for this?
• "Jay-Z was in Capri on vacation, and went to the studio to hear the song and said that he wanted to contribute to the song and added rap verses of his own to it." → Use of "the song" twice close together is a bit disjointed.
• "During the photo shoot for Charmbracelet at Capri, Carey found Def Leppard's album Vault (1995), which contains the song, and decided to cover it." → What do you mean by "found"? Was it on the street? Lol.
• "In an interview with Billboard, Carey said that the song is "an example of her musical diversity"." → Source?

Music and lyrics

• This section repeats a lot of what has been said in the previous sections. "An additional version of the song featuring vocals by Justin Timberlake was recorded, but was not commissioned for release." being one of them.

Promotion

• "where she performed a four songs" → Remove the "a"

Re-release

• "Carey included her duet with Busta Rhymes, which was released as a single from his album, It Ain't Safe No More (2002),[121] and became Carey's highest charting song internationally since 2001, reaching top five peaks in Australia, Canada, the Netherlands, Ireland, Italy, Switzerland, the US and the UK." → At no point do you say the name of the song.

Credits and personnel

• There's no need for the collapsable here. Doesn't look right at all.

Charts and certifications

• 2002, 2003 and 2004 should have different tables respective of what year the album had it's peak in that country.
• Put the certifications table under the Year end table.

References

• MTV should not be in italics anywhere.

Status

On hold for 7 days. AARON• ^TALK 18:28, 7 January 2013 (UTC)

Addressed a few. Will finish by tomorrow. Thank you for reviewing the article Aaron. 五代 (talk) 04:02, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

That's okay. Let me know. AARON• ^TALK 18:39, 8 January 2013 (UTC)

Aaron, I will fix the issues by Sunday. I'm very busy with college assignments atm :( 五代 (talk) 10:47, 10 January 2013 (UTC)

All done Aaron :) Let me know if there's something left to address. 五代 (talk) 12:29, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

Passing. AARON• ^TALK 13:36, 11 January 2013 (UTC)

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