Talk:Chanchullo (album)
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Pdebee in topic Review of final draft, please? ツ
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Review of final draft, please? ツ
editDear Neodop, 
At your convenience, please would you kindly review my final draft of the present article? I have done all I can for now and would be most grateful for your comments. Please also feel free to apply any changes or other improvements you deem necessary or appropriate; no rush.
When moving it to main space, I intend to rename it to the simpler title of Chanchullo (album), since there is no other album but we need to disambiguate it from the single.
Thank you very much for your cooperation; it is much appreciated.
With kind regards for now;
Patrick. ツ Pdebee.(talk)(guestbook) 22:28, 19 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Pdebee: Overall it looks very good. The recording section reads a bit like bullet points so I have reworked it to make it more in line with the MOS. Please don't hesitate to make any changes :) Great job as always. Best, Neodop (talk) 03:46, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
- Dear Neodop,
- Thank you so much; this is most excellent! You have done a magnificent job of polishing the content I had laid out as a condensed version of the sleeve notes: by paraphrasing and restructuring this raw material per MOS:ALBUM, you have really added value to the article, and I am most grateful to you. Thank you also for re-instating the wikilinks which I had removed (I was worried about WP:REPEATLINK) and also for fixing all the typos I had left in some of the Spanish surnames (they had also been omitted in the sources).
- As a result of your most useful contributions, I think we're ready to publish and I will do this within the next hour or so.
- In a few days' time, I will approach you again for your final review of my draft article on Raúl Planas; I am still waiting for a couple of CDs to arrive but other than that, I feel that draft is in good shape and ready for your review, whenever convenient.
- Very many thanks once again for your generous, and always helpful, assistance.
- With kind regards for now;
- Patrick. ツ Pdebee.(talk)(guestbook) 15:53, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
- Dear Neodop,