Talk:Chan Wah-shun
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editI did a little grammar cleanup, and hopefully, haven't done any damage to the intent of the original author. Here are some random thoughts...
The sentence "He often represented his sifu to take challenges and took victory beautifully" is a tad worrisome. Obviously, the original version of this article was written by a non-naitive English speaker; consequently, the literal meaning of that sentence is ambiguous. Are they trying to indicate that Chan was very skillful in "taking" victory, or do they mean that he was exceptionally gracious when he was victorious? The context of the paragraph, which is basically about Chan's skill, tends to indicate the former, but common usage tends (I think) to indicate the latter. I decided just to leave it alone.
Finally, I just didn't have the heart to make this article sound like it was written by a boring American Midwesterner. Why *shouldn't* "martial art" be singular? All those clunkily strung together declarative sentences aren't really bad grammar, either. I kind of like it this way.
Ciao.
When
editThere are no dates in this article. When did it happen? RJFJR 15:20, 5 January 2007 (UTC)
There was a lot of material in this article that was not in the sole (so far) source article. I have cut down the article significantly, while leaving in information that sounds plausible. I have also tidied the article up generally (grammar, neutrality, etc.). Janggeom (talk) 07:31, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
Is he notable ? 172.56.22.48 (talk) 13:43, 19 March 2015 (UTC)
2 different dates of death?
editThe start of the article says "Chan Wah-shun (c. 1849 – 1905)", which is corroborated by the infobox to the right. However, under 'Background' it is said that "Chan died of illness in 1913 and was buried there." Which date of death should a reader rely on? 1905 or 1913? Jaysee101 (talk) 13:53, 14 July 2022 (UTC)