Talk:Chabela Romero/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead edit

Professional wrestling career edit

  • "it is not certain who Romero won the championship from" - uncertain as to who Romero
  • "In 1965/1966" - 1965 to 1966
  • "Records are uncertain when Romero's third and final reign as the Mexican National Women's Championship ended," - uncertain as to when
  • "as a result of her Lucha de APuestas victory on November 1, 1975." - the character in bold is unneeded
  • "working for All Japan Women's Pro-Wrestling (AJW)" - the acronyms are unneeded since they are not used again
  • "on a Universal Wrestling Association show." - the acronyms of UWA should be mentioned in parentheses
  • "in which Romero defeated Vicki Williams to win the UWA World Women's Championship," - the comma should be replaced by a period to end the sentence
  • "forcing her to be shaved bald afterwards" - afterward
  • "shaved bald afterwards," - the comma should be replaced by a period to end the sentence
  • "for reasons that have not been documented." - undocumented reasons.

Death edit

  • "Isabela Romero Rangel died on April 19, 1985." - What did she die of? Do we know?

References edit

  • Try not to use a reference from Facebook if possible

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:42, 27 May 2020 (UTC)Reply