Talk:Cemil Cahit Toydemir
Latest comment: 7 months ago by 2601:18C:9001:9B10:4D9E:7A0B:2F35:F10A in topic Rough Shape
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Rough Shape
editThis article is in desperate need of a second draft. Grammar and syntax errors abound and a significant chunk of the subject's life is totally absent despite being hinted at - this guy was in the Italo-Turkish war, the Caucasian front of WW1 (and presumably all of the social and political chaos that accompanied it), and the formation of modern Turkey and all that gets elaboration is a diplomatic visit he made in his twilight years? Surely there has to be more on this guy. 73.194.204.218 (talk) 15:54, 1 October 2022 (UTC)
- I cleaned up the grammatical mistakes but if those aspects are to be discussed then there needs to be reliable sources that can be cited to. 2601:18C:9001:9B10:4D9E:7A0B:2F35:F10A (talk) 03:32, 15 January 2024 (UTC)