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Second-person imperative

In the "Venom" section, the last sentence of the first paragraph ends with the second-person imperative clause, "please do not underestimate the venom of this snake". I would like to suggest rephrasing, perhaps retaining an indication that the venom is dangerous (unexpectedly so, based on the inclusion of the sentence?), but which does not directly address, or request anything of, the reader. Cheers Fitzws (talk) 03:49, 1 November 2018 (UTC)