Talk:Caught in a Moment

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Till in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 7 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Info box/Lead
Background and release
  • During 2003, the Sugababes began working on their third studio album Three (2003), in which they wrote and recorded material while they travelled around the world and performed on tours such as the Liverpool Summer Pops. → This isn't working. During 2003 implies all of 2003, and you can't begin something for the duration of the year. Suggest changing to: In 2003, the Sugababes started to record songs for their third studio album, Three (2003). They wrote and recorded material in various countries around the world as they performed at various musical events such as the Liverpool Summer Pops.
  • The album's fourth and final single, → As the album's fourth and final single,
Composition and lyrics
Chart performance
Live performances
Credits and personnel
Status

On hold.  — AARONTALK 14:41, 7 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Fixed everything thanks. Till 11:48, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Passing.
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