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References edit
The references in this article as it stands today are a mess. The great tranche of references at the end of the lead are meaningless because they cite different things, but are at the same location. They need to be associated with the facts they contain, and I have flagged the article so. They appear to have been placed there as somewhere to hang them that is allegedly within the text. WP:CITE et al are useful here. Fiddle Faddle 09:39, 30 September 2013 (UTC)
- Having looked at the article in some detail, there is a pressing need either for further citations or for text to be stripped away where uncited. The article is also full of weasel and peacock words and puffery. I've marked much of this and may go back in soon to start removal. Some of the citations are a matter, though, of moving the great list to the correct places. Fiddle Faddle 10:01, 30 September 2013 (UTC)