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70% women/children claim - outdated
From the intro paragraphs: "The vast majority of casualties have been in the Gaza Strip: over 33,091 have been killed, 70% of them are women and minors."
This is an outdated claim. The MOH no longer claims that 70% (or 72%) of those killed are women and children. They explicitly dissociate themselves from the claim, which they made for over five months with earliest mention on October 18 [1], in a April 1 Sky News Article. The relevant section of the article (emphasis mine):
"Of the 21,703 identified fatalities whose details have been shared by the Hamas-run health ministry, 13,207 were women, children or elderly (61%).
Until recently, however, the ministry had been reporting a figure of 72%.
Mr al Wahaidi told Sky News that this was a "media estimate". He was not able to explain the basis for this estimate or who had produced it.
Since speaking to Sky News, he has stopped using this figure in his reports for the health ministry. It continues to be used by the government media office, a separate branch of Gaza's government." [2]
The 72% women/children claim was last made in the 3/23 [3] MOH Health Sector Emergency Report and dropped in the next report published 3/27, when the MOH began to instead say that a majority of those killed were women and children. [4] In the April 1 report, they dropped that formulation and have since not included any claims about the overall demographic breakdown of fatalities in the HSE reports. [5]
The current citation for the 70% figure, which this article states as fact rather than an MOH claim, also includes this section:
"Gaza's health ministry says 70% of those killed in the territory are women and children. Its most recent breakdown of casualties recorded in hospitals shows women and children make up 58% of those deaths. Al-Qudra could not explain the discrepancy." [6]
Beyond the MOH dropping the claim (though the GMO persists with it [7]), many analysts came to the conclusion that the 70% claim was inaccurate, including Prof. Michael Spagat, who is a recognized expert in the field. In an April 21 article analyzing a 4/1 data release by the MOH, he concluded the following:
"First, the percentage of women and children killed does seem to be very high, roughly 60%, but the oft-cited claim that 70% of the Gazans killed in the conflict are women and children seems increasingly untenable." [8]
The remainder of the Spagat article contains a number of critical points concerning incomplete data and concerns with the MOH's media reports collection methodology, but those are deserving of their own post.
There is no reason to include a claim (stated as fact, no less) which the MOH no longer makes, which the available data does not support, and which recognized experts whose previous pieces are already cited in the article hold is inaccurate.
[1] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/4052
[3] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5224. Claims can be found on page 2 of the reports for [3], [4], and [5]. All MOH HSE reports are also archived at the following link: https://archive.org/details/moh-gaza-health-sector-emergency-reports/
[4] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5237
[5] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5258
[6] https://www.npr.org/2024/02/29/1234159514/gaza-death-toll-30000-palestinians-israel-hamas-war
[7] https://t.me/mediagovps/2744
[8] https://aoav.org.uk/2024/analysis-of-new-death-data-from-gazas-health-ministry-reveals-several-concerns/ 38.104.28.58 (talk) 21:23, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have to agree with you, Dr Michael Spagat is as good an expert as we're going to find on the subject. The data collection system is rather broken and it is hard to be that sure about any figure now. The hospital figures and ratios are almost certainly very different from the actual figures, so who knows what the actual figures are with any sort of crediblity. About all we can say now is that the totals they give are a lower bound on the actual deaths. NadVolum (talk) 00:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Dr. Spagat also argues against assuming that the MOH claims are a lower bound. From his most recent article, right below what was previously quoted (again, emphasis mine):
- "Second, the announced total number of Gazans killed in the war, now exceeding 33,000, may seem plausible but it is not a documented fact. This figure includes roughly 13,000 deaths that have, apparently, been entered into an unavailable database using an unknown methodology. The short description of sources contributing to this figure has just shifted from “reliable media sources” to that plus first responders. First responders can, potentially, provide useful estimates of numbers of people, (e.g., trapped under rubble). However, victims covered by such estimates might eventually be captured by the hospital system and/or be reported through the publicly available form. Thus, we should dismiss the common claim that, because many of the dead are trapped under rubble or are missing for other reasons, the announced totals are undercounts. To the contrary, there seem to be at least two channels, aside from hospitals, through which such deaths can be captured. [1]
- That the MOH has not been willing to give any more detail on the "reliable media sources" is a major driver of uncertainty. Dr. Spagat also found significant overlap between the self-reported deaths and the hospital records (over 15% of the self-reports were duplicates) -- that's unsurprising, since those who have lost family members are likely to report everyone to be sure they are counted, even if they may have been registered through a hospital/morgue. Without knowing more about the media reports methodology, it is difficult to gauge the rate of duplicates it has. The media reports have also fluctuated enormously since April 1, with the same magnitude of revisions to self-reports or the hospital reports on the same day -- that is unusual and may indicate that media reports are in part being used as a slush category to avoid downward revisions in the total claim.
- [1] https://aoav.org.uk/2024/analysis-of-new-death-data-from-gazas-health-ministry-reveals-several-concerns/ 2601:152:4C83:D60:54F2:F129:12DC:1F31 (talk) 05:29, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- He is not saying it is not an undercount, he is saying that there is a possibility that due to overlaps in the counting it is an undrrcount. And that's true as regards comparing it to their original system, the counting is now a mess. However as fao compared to the total actual deaths the possibility of it being an undercount would require that their estimate of the missing they have given before has been far too high or there is some massive collusion outside of the Health Ministry when it would be much easier to do it within. I don't know why he has said something like that when the current undercount is pretty clear or as he says plausible. He never says it is not actually reasonable or plausible. That overlap probably explains why some figures have been revised down, especially for men where if they would be more likely to be away from home or a militant. Of course the 'studies' by Israeli propanda groups have just said these revisions down show the Ministry of Health is fiddling the figures so the figures can't be trusted and are probably much lower. What point would be served by them revising figures down when they're supposedly inflating them? NadVolum (talk) 13:27, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- That is a misread of what Spagat says. His point can't be made much more explicit than the section I italicized. The point makes itself: with two large pools of data (self-reports and media reports) that can capture those under the rubble or missing, you can't assume an undercount.
- Overlaps in the counting would result in overreporting, not underreporting. Overlap can't explain why media reports moves both up and down in conjunction with revisions to hospital counts and self-reports -- if you cut overlaps, the overall total should drop as a result, but instead what is observed is media reports increasing as an offset.
- But that is outside of Prof. Spagat's point, which he makes quite clearly: "Thus, we should dismiss the common claim that, because many of the dead are trapped under rubble or are missing for other reasons, the announced totals are undercounts." 2601:152:4C83:D60:A9F2:AD3:9EF9:274C (talk) 14:53, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Even if all the extra from outside the hospitals is discounted - which is just stupid as they're practically out of action, what he says just doesn't make much sense as far as I can figure out. I suppose he has to be put in as he is an expert on the subject but I wouldn't remove anything because of him yet because what he is saying would come under WP:EXTRAORDINARY. NadVolum (talk) 11:29, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- You cant on one hand accept Hamas ran Ministry of Health records and numbers as true, and when the same entity reports that the actual death count is lower - you suddenly ignore it becauae the system muat be broken? Elyasaf755 (talk) 16:33, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- I'm not objecting to him saying the figures should be lower. What I'm objecting to is the idea that the reduction or errors is anywhere near enough to say that the number of deaths in Gaza is lower than what they have registered. It is fairly easy to see that there would have to be as huge manipulation of the figures for a number of months to do that, I can't see how to do it without doing something like discarding all the deaths registered outside the hospital system, saying nearly all the missing that they previously counted as under the rubble have now been recorded and all the dead militants have been included in the count of men and the IDF haven't killed anybody for the last couple of months. Basically it is a WP:EXTRAORDINARY claim. NadVolum (talk) 18:14, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- You cant on one hand accept Hamas ran Ministry of Health records and numbers as true, and when the same entity reports that the actual death count is lower - you suddenly ignore it becauae the system muat be broken? Elyasaf755 (talk) 16:33, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Even if all the extra from outside the hospitals is discounted - which is just stupid as they're practically out of action, what he says just doesn't make much sense as far as I can figure out. I suppose he has to be put in as he is an expert on the subject but I wouldn't remove anything because of him yet because what he is saying would come under WP:EXTRAORDINARY. NadVolum (talk) 11:29, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- He is not saying it is not an undercount, he is saying that there is a possibility that due to overlaps in the counting it is an undrrcount. And that's true as regards comparing it to their original system, the counting is now a mess. However as fao compared to the total actual deaths the possibility of it being an undercount would require that their estimate of the missing they have given before has been far too high or there is some massive collusion outside of the Health Ministry when it would be much easier to do it within. I don't know why he has said something like that when the current undercount is pretty clear or as he says plausible. He never says it is not actually reasonable or plausible. That overlap probably explains why some figures have been revised down, especially for men where if they would be more likely to be away from home or a militant. Of course the 'studies' by Israeli propanda groups have just said these revisions down show the Ministry of Health is fiddling the figures so the figures can't be trusted and are probably much lower. What point would be served by them revising figures down when they're supposedly inflating them? NadVolum (talk) 13:27, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
Gazan Causulties are Incorrect
According to data analysis of the Gaza Ministry of Health report there are "21,703 deaths but 440 have duplicate IDs, 470 have no IDs and 792 have the wrong number of digits in their IDs. A further 1,486 have invalid IDs even though they do have the requisite 9 digits.[1] The remaining 18,515 deaths all have listed sexes but 219 are missing ages. In short, roughly 1/7 of the entries in the new data release have quality problems.", so the numbers are not even close to the 34k reported on this Wiki page. Moreover, according to the same analysis there are at most 6,520 dead Gazans under the age of 18, which is not even 1/3 of the death count.
https://reliefweb.int/report/occupied-palestinian-territory/analysis-new-death-data-gazas-health-ministry-reveals-several-concerns Elyasaf755 (talk) 11:13, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yes there are problems with the hospital data. And the overall casualty figures. The figures for children outside the hospital is much higher. Children make up half the population and a very large percentage of the dead are from large bombs which don't somehow avoid children. When the hospital system was more intact the percentage of children was quite a bit higher. It is far more likely they are not being taken to the remaining hospitals which can't treat them properly and are regularly attacked. If you really though they were making up the figures don't you think they would have inflated this figure? NadVolum (talk) 12:13, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- This ia according to the Gaza Ministry of Health, they published a detailed spreadsheet with all the information of the people that died, sums up to 21,703 people in total. They did inflate the numbers, as the analysis shows, but they couldnt inflate it too much; the list contains duplicates, imaginary names, invalid IDs (IDs of 1 and 2 digits), etc... this wiki details about the death toll in Gaza needs to be fix, as even according to Hamas figures relevant to April 1st, the numbers are much smaller than reported, as I mentioned above. Elyasaf755 (talk) 16:27, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Every single error is a duplicate or made up? And even with all the 3000 identified with problems rather than the 440 identified as duplicate it really wouldn't make all that much difference. You are saying there is some reason to ignore the whole 18,515 deaths registered outside the hospital system because of quality problems with some of them? And that the three remaining hospitals are doing a marvellus job of recording all the deaths and there's no-one missing under the rubble? And all the militants are included in the figures? Or what kind of thing are you trying to say? Does it not occur to you that if they were making up all this up that it would be fairly easy to just have an Excel macro generate stuff with all this data in okay or do you just think oh they're terrorists they make things up including working to generate all these different types of error? This is getting like the Iraq war when everytime they had some brilliant idea about where the weapons of mass destruction weere hidden and then checked and they weren't found they saif Saddam musdt be even more cunning and evil than we originally though. Perhaps they put in the errors to fool us via a clever programme so we think they are evidence to show they weren't machine generated. NadVolum (talk) 18:36, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, I'm not sure how 500 duplicate ID errors out of the 100,000 or so people that have passed through the hospital system as casualties of some sort is really surprising given the situation on the ground. I mean, have you seen the footage from the facilities? It's incredible they're even still helping people at all, let alone recording any data. Iskandar323 (talk) 17:39, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- This ia according to the Gaza Ministry of Health, they published a detailed spreadsheet with all the information of the people that died, sums up to 21,703 people in total. They did inflate the numbers, as the analysis shows, but they couldnt inflate it too much; the list contains duplicates, imaginary names, invalid IDs (IDs of 1 and 2 digits), etc... this wiki details about the death toll in Gaza needs to be fix, as even according to Hamas figures relevant to April 1st, the numbers are much smaller than reported, as I mentioned above. Elyasaf755 (talk) 16:27, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
Random ref tag in 'Civilian to military ratio' section
There's a random `</ref>` in the fifth paragraph of the 'Civilian to military ratio' section. Someone ought to remove it. Vladmashk (talk) 21:03, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Have removed that - thanks for pointing it out. NadVolum (talk) 23:30, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
The comparison with Ukraine war is wrong
"The total civilian death toll would surpass Ukraine's total of 9,614, as of 10 September 2023, including around 600 children" Ukrainian source have estimated there were 75000 killed people in Mariupol alone, and that the total death toll in the war is vastly underestimated because of Russian occupation of the area. Source: Russia scrubs Mariupol's Ukraine identity, builds on death | AP News If everybody takes the unproven claims of Hamas' health ministry, then we definitely should go with what Ukrainian officials say. 2A00:A041:2C22:700:CEFB:FC9D:38F1:CA9 (talk) 14:15, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Gazan Health Ministry is supported as either accurate or understated by both the United States:
- https://www.middleeasteye.net/live-update/senior-us-official-suggests-gaza-death-toll-may-be-higher-being-cited
- And Israel:
- https://www.vice.com/en/article/y3w4w7/israeli-intelligence-health-ministry-death-toll
- The point on Ukrainian casualties being unreliable is true, however it should be noted that the Gazan casualties are only of those found who's bodies have been identified; there are a massive number of unidentifiable bodies, earthed mass graves, and bodies trapped under rubble which are not included in the statistic. From this perspective, both Ukrainian and Gazan casualties are undercounted for similar reasons. Neurolimal (talk) 15:54, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- In general, it makes sense to say that they would both be undercounted for those reasons. However, the statistics given for Ukraine are from a UN agency that specifically counts only the deaths it has been able to personally verify and identify.
- Both Ukraine and Russia's governments try to prevent each other from knowing what the real casualty numbers are. It's part of their war strategy. That has made it wildly difficult for the UN to verify and identify deaths. Especially civilian deaths.
- Hamas uses the opposite strategy: report all the deaths it knows of, just don't clarify which ones are civilians. So in Gaza, there's much more data available on deaths than in Ukraine.
- The only reason we have the 75,000 number for Mariupol is that the AP did the in-depth investigation mentioned above, and talked to multiple people that Russia had tasked with removing bodies from the streets and keeping track of the numbers.
- ([1]https://apnews.com/article/russia-ukraine-war-erasing-mariupol-499dceae43ed77f2ebfe750ea99b9ad9)
- There have been other deep dives into Russia's military tactics in Mariupol and how lethal they were, including one journalist's documentary that I believe just won an Academy Award. It seems very likely that the 75,000 number for Mariupol is accurate.
- Since Ukraine is much larger than the Gaza Strip, and Russia has taken other Ukranian cities, it seems particularly misleading to state that either the civilian or total deaths in Gaza exceed those in Ukraine. Oakling (talk) 01:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- The evidence does show that those remarks were wrong, more have been killed in Ukraine than Gaza. I'm not certain what one can be done about those cited remarks though unless artices saying the opposite can be found.
- As to your speculations about saying the casualties are higher or lower, you'd need citations. It is far too easy for people to believe what they speculate and not look for or see evidence for the opposite. That's why citations are needed in Wikipedia. NadVolum (talk) 09:53, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
“Disputed”
The death toll is not disputed. Foreign agencies don’t doubt it, the Israeli government doesn’t doubt it, US government government officials say its higher and in reality the death toll is a massive undercount.
considering the “um actually health ministry is khamas” argument then a better word to use would be “controversial”. The only numbers that have come up instead of GHM was those stating it was higher, and the IDF estimating that 20,000 were killed, back when the Gaza health ministry death toll was at 10,000 The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 07:22, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
- In every war you'll get people arguing about everything and can believe two impossible things before breakfast. Probably some of the same people who taught their children the Israeli Friendship Song 2023 will be arguing that the IDF are the most moral army in the world and go to extreme lengths to protect civilians. I'd say not to worry too much about it and just follow Wikipedia's policies. NadVolum (talk) 11:32, 4 May 2024 (UTC)
Potentially Misleading Chart?
There are a number of reasons to believe that the freeze in Gazan casualty figures stems from the following:
- A collapse of the health system; hospitals submit their casualty figures to a central database, however less than twelve out of the thirty-six hospitals are still operating, and even that is at partial functionality: https://www.rescue.org/article/collapse-gazas-health-system
- The siege upon two of Gaza's biggest hospitals (Al-Shifa and Nasser), which were critical nodes in aggregating Gazan casualties, has rendered both inoperable: https://www.reuters.com/world/middle-east/destruction-gazas-shifa-hospital-rips-heart-out-health-system-who-says-2024-04-02/
- Rolling blackouts prevent the updating of Gazan casualties to a central database: https://www.npr.org/2024/03/03/1229402063/gaza-communications-cell-phone-internet-service-blackouts-paltel
- Rescue services, which unearthed the injured & corpses from rubble and transported them to hospitals for aid/counting have largely been dismantled by the destruction: https://www.npr.org/2024/02/29/1234159514/gaza-death-toll-30000-palestinians-israel-hamas-war
In light of this, I personally feel that the chart which shows a diminishing rate of casualties paints a false image of the war becoming less severe, when the likely reality is that we simply are not getting new figures on casualties.
My proposal would be to convert the graph to a dotted line from March onwards (as the second assault on Al-Shifa and the assault on Nasser both occurred that month, and the casualty reporting visibly retarded going forward from those events) with an annotation below noting that the central hospitals which aggregated casualties were destroyed. Neurolimal (talk) 16:14, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- On the other hand they are now getting more people to report injuries and deaths. And there is definitely no freeze, it is just going up less steeply than before. More importantly you have to provide definite evidence or peferably a citation saying it rather than conjecture. You may be right but what you have above is definitely WP:OR. NadVolum (talk) 17:18, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Support I agree with changing the chart as User:Nuerolimal suggests above. The war has reduced the medical infrastructure within the Gaza Strip to such a degree that the "deaths" count represented in this manner is misleading and possibly suggestive of a reduced casualty count or "lighter" war – when that is not the case. Detsom (talk) 06:10, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Hi User:NadVolum Wondering if you could you clarify "they are now getting more people to report injuries and deaths"? I'm not quite sure what you mean. Also I don't see WP:OR as you are claiming, so wondering if you could clarify that was well. They provided WP:RS and newer news certainly bolsters the suggestion from User:Nerolimal.
- It's fairly well known that the Gaza Health Ministry was only recording casualties that arrived to hospitals or morgues. A quote from Associated Press:
"Hospital administrators say they keep records of every wounded person occupying a bed and every dead body arriving at a morgue. They enter this data into a computerized system shared with al-Qidra and colleagues. According to screenshots hospital directors sent to AP, the system looks like a color-coded spreadsheet divided into categories: name, ID number, date of hospital entry, type of injury, condition."
- Additionally, here's an article published 8 days ago from a newspaper of record, The Wall Street Journal, titled In Gaza, Authorities Lose Count of the Dead. This article clearly demonstrates the collapse of the Gaza Health Ministry, and supports User:Neurolimal's recommendation of changing the chart to better reflect the situation on the ground. Here's a quote from WSJ:
"Gaza’s Palestinian health authorities say they can no longer count all their dead. Hospitals, emergency services and communications are barely functioning. Extracting bodies from the vast number of collapsed buildings is a gargantuan task and not a priority while the war continues."
Detsom (talk) 06:34, 6 May 2024 (UTC)- For a while now they have included numbers of dead from journalists and first reponders plus forms and web link from people to identify people to put in details of people they know are dead. I read that those identified by a form are taken away from the count of unidentified ones, I guess to err on the low side but the whole business must be a mess. And yes thousands would be lost under rubble and there wouldn't even be much of a media count from the north. There's a big article about all this in [2] and I might have got bits wrong. NadVolum (talk) 14:22, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
Minor edit request - Regarding airstrikes and food infrastructure
"Airstrikes have destroyed food infrastructure, such as bakeries, mills, and food stores, and there is a widespread scarcity of essential supplies due to the blockade of aid." I believe that while airstrikes have been the main source of bombardment, the on the ground fighting has involved "battlefield shaping" where buildings are demolished, and specialized bulldozers during combat. I checked the sources and they didn't attribute to airstrikes the cause of the devastation, if someone could find a source for the claim that airstrikes were the cause that would be much appreciated. I suspect this claim relates to devastation of food infrastructure in inhabited areas, if one cannot be found can this be tagged with citation needed? or if that's too inflammatory for some reason otherwise noted that the sources don't vindicate this claim.
I don't think there is any rush.
Thank you 163.53.144.63 (talk) 13:15, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Most of the destruction of buildings has been by bombs, you can't just drive a bulldozer into a building without worry. A number of buildings like universities and suchlike have been specially targetted by sappers but that is only a small portion of the total. See for example [3], it talks about the bombing/ Where the bulldozers have been used to cause damage is in the fields outside as described in [4]. I'm not sure if that answers your question as I'm not exactly sure what the question is or what the shaping is supposed to be about. NadVolum (talk) 14:03, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
False claim about ICJ ruling in article
The President of the ICJ clarified that the court found Gazans had a "plausible right to be protected from Genocide," and did not rule on the plausibility that genocide is occurring. https://www.timesofisrael.com/plausibility-in-the-south-african-genocide-case-against-israel-is-not-what-it-seemed/ 47.208.110.136 (talk) 18:22, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Well I tried to put that in but as convoluted judgespeak who knows, I could have easily got it wrong! NadVolum (talk) 19:05, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Two proposed changes -- header and death toll section
70% Women/Children Claim
This sentence of the header -- "The vast majority of casualties have been in the Gaza Strip: over 34,262 have been killed, 70% of them are women and minors" should be revised in light of the available information.
The Gaza Health Ministry no longer makes the claim that 70% of those killed are women in children in its Health Sector Emergency reports, and has not since March 23. [1] Only the Government Media Office (GMO) continues to make that claim, and the Health Ministry has not offered an explanation of the discrepancy [2] and declined to defend the GMO figures in response to queries from Sky News in early April. [3]
Moreover, the available Health Ministry data has not supported the 70% claim at any point since they first began publishing Health Sector Emergency reports on December 11. [4] Moreover, an MOH report on 5/2 (covering data up to 4/30) indicated that the death toll included 10,006 adult men, 4,959 adult women, 7,797 children, and 1,924 elderly, along with 9,936 reported fatalities coming from media reports (which the Health Ministry renamed as incomplete entries at the start of April, but which Health Sector reports still identify as media reports). 40.5% of fatalities for which there is information are adult men (18-59), 20.1% are adult women (18-59), 31.6% are children (0-17), and 7.8% are elderly, meaning that the maximum percentage of women and children (if it is assumed that all elderly deaths are women), is 59.5%, more likely between 55% and 56% assuming an even split between elderly men and women. [5] UN-OCHA, as of May 8, has listed these figures in their Reported Impact statements as well. [6]
These figures demonstrate that the GMO claims about the number of women and children killed are impossible. On May 8, the GMO claimed that out of 34,844 total deaths, 15,002 were children and 9,892 were women (combined, this would be 71.4% of the total). [7] That would imply a maximum of 9,949 men killed, 57 fewer than the number of men (18-59) the Health Ministry reported alone, not considering any deaths attributed to media reports.
It is worth pointing out that multiple analysts have published work indicating the 70% figure was implausible since early this year, based on the available data. [8]
Given that the Health Ministry does not make the 70% claim anymore and its own data indicates that it is impossible, this sentence should be changed to reflect that fact. A proposed revision would read (changing casualties specifically to "identified dead" because casualties means both those killed and injured, and a majority of those reported injured are adult men, according to the Health Ministry, and because we do not know the demographic breakdown of the fatalities attributed to media reports):
"The vast majority of casualties have been in the Gaza Strip: over 34,262 have been killed, according to the Gaza Health Ministry, a majority of the identified dead are women and minors."
It would be worth updating the sidebar pie chart from Prof. Spagat and Silverman's November analysis with the new Health Ministry figures, citing them directly -- as it stands, the chart is 6 months out of date.
The OCHA changed their claim about the numbers of woman and child casualties to about half of the previous claims (more than 9500 women to 4959 and more than 14500 children to 7797) between their updated the 6 of May [1] and 8 of May [2].
Mistaken Attribution of GMO figures
A separate issue apparent throughout the article: figures are attributed to the Health Ministry which come from the GMO. This applies to the following sentences:
- "As of 29 February, the Gaza Health Ministry reports that at least 30,000 Palestinians (including over 10,000 minors) have been killed, over 70,000 injured, and 10,000 are missing under rubble, totaling over 110,000 casualties since the war began, which is about 5% of Gaza's 2.3 million population." The way this sentence is currently written attributes all figures to the Health Ministry, which is incorrect for the number of minors killed and number missing or under the rubble. It should be rewritten to accurately convey who is claiming what.
- "The casualties and damages of the conflict in Gaza up to the 175th day are outlined as follows: Women and children make up 73% of the total victims of the war. There have been 14,350 child casualties. Additionally, 9,460 women have lost their lives." This both cites the GMO figures and does it from a state-run Iranian news agency -- it should be replaced with the updated MOH figures, and the article should group the demographic breakdown of the death toll into one place and keep it consistent.
- "On 29 February 2024, Gaza's Ministry of Health reported that 44% (i.e. over 13,000) of the fatalities were children." The Ministry of Health did not claim this on February 29, nor does the cited NPR article indicate that. The relevant sentences: "Gaza's health ministry says 70% of those killed in the territory are women and children. Its most recent breakdown of casualties recorded in hospitals shows women and children make up 58% of those deaths. Al-Qudra could not explain the discrepancy." [2] The GMO, however, did claim on February 29 that 13,230 children had been killed. [9] This should either be properly cited/attributed to the GMO, preferably using the primary source, or it should be deleted given the demonstrated unreliability of GMO figures.
Mis-dated developments
Additionally, the dates given for several developments in the "Death Toll" section are incorrect. The Health Ministry began using media reports in early November, while the article as it stands implies this happened at the end of February. At least one analyst believes the practice began as early as November 3. [10] In any case, the Health Ministry reported over 4,000 deaths from media reports by December 11, so the practice at least began before then.
The Google Form is listed as having started in March 2024. However, it was first published on January 6 and circulated on official government channels. [11] This should be corrected.
[1] Compare the language in the 3/23 and 3/27 MOH reports (page 2) -- shifts from claiming over 70% to claiming a simple majority. By the 4/1 report, there are no claims about overall demographic breakdowns at all. See Telegram (https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5224 (3/23) https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5237 (3/27), and https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5258 (4/1)) or this archive: https://archive.org/details/moh-gaza-health-sector-emergency-reports/.
[2] https://www.npr.org/2024/02/29/1234159514/gaza-death-toll-30000-palestinians-israel-hamas-war
[3] "Until recently, however, the ministry had been reporting a figure of 72%. Mr al Wahaidi told Sky News that this was a "media estimate". He was not able to explain the basis for this estimate or who had produced it. Since speaking to Sky News, he has stopped using this figure in his reports for the health ministry. It continues to be used by the government media office, a separate branch of Gaza's government." https://news.sky.com/story/amp/israel-hamas-war-health-system-collapse-in-gaza-leaves-authorities-struggling-to-count-the-dead-13107279
[4] Per the 12/11 report, adult men made up 39.1% (5,577/14,269) of deaths recorded in the hospital system. No demographic breakdown was given, or has been given at any point, of the reported fatalities attributed to media sources. https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/4576.
[5] Report here: https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5397. Later infographic here: https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5419.
[6] https://www.ochaopt.org/content/hostilities-gaza-strip-and-israel-reported-impact-day-215.
[7] https://t.me/mediagovps/2854.
[8] See Prof. Michael Spagat: https://aoav.org.uk/2024/analysis-of-new-death-data-from-gazas-health-ministry-reveals-several-concerns/. There are also two reports from the Washington Institute for Near East Policy (I understand this is not a preferred source for many, but they are clear about only utilizing MOH data for these analyses and dovetail with Spagat's analysis on the 70% point): https://www.washingtoninstitute.org/policy-analysis/how-hamas-manipulates-gaza-fatality-numbers-examining-male-undercount-and-other and https://www.washingtoninstitute.org/policy-analysis/gaza-fatality-data-has-become-completely-unreliable.
[9] https://t.me/mediagovps/2442.
[11] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/4718. ExVivoExSitu (talk) 17:26, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- THis article comes under WP:ARBECR and this is your first edit to Wikipedia. The essay above is not in a form I can construe as anything like two straightforward edits. NadVolum (talk) 18:15, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Why do wikipedia editors here seem to prirortize some sort of kafkesque bureaucracy over correcting the misinformation in this article and seeking the facts? 2A02:14F:17A:47BE:6961:A0F1:27A6:8A12 (talk) 19:14, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- See WP:Contentious topics and WP:Contentious topics/Arab–Israeli conflict, this is considered a contentious area and the restrictions are to stop the talk pages being turned into shouting matches of random people who have no experience editing Wikipedia. I have already been told off by an admin for responding to a query like this one. NadVolum (talk) 23:42, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- Why do wikipedia editors here seem to prirortize some sort of kafkesque bureaucracy over correcting the misinformation in this article and seeking the facts? 2A02:14F:17A:47BE:6961:A0F1:27A6:8A12 (talk) 19:14, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ ochaopt.org. OCHA https://www.ochaopt.org/content/hostilities-gaza-strip-and-israel-reported-impact-day-213. Retrieved 22 May 2024.
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As of 8 April 2024, over 34,000 people (33,091 Palestinian[1] and 1,410 Israeli[9]) have been reported as killed in the Israel–Hamas war, including 95 journalists (90 Palestinian, 2 Israeli and 3 Lebanese)[10] and over 224 humanitarian aid workers, including 179 employees of UNRWA.[11]
The vast majority of casualties have been in the Gaza Strip: over 33,091 have been killed, 70% of them are women and minors.[12] In December 2023, Euro-Mediterranean Human Rights Monitor estimated 90% of the casualties were civilians,[13][14] while the IDF put the civilian ratio at 66% of those killed.[15] The death toll comes from the Gaza Health Ministry and the total death toll in Gaza is presumed to be higher than reported,[16][17] with thousands remaining unaccounted for, including those trapped under rubble.[12][18]
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As of 8 April 2024, over 34,000 people (33,091 Palestinian[1] and 1,410 Israeli[9]) have been reported as killed in the Israel–Hamas war by the Gaza Health Ministry, including 95 journalists (90 Palestinian, 2 Israeli and 3 Lebanese)[10] and over 224 humanitarian aid workers, including 179 employees of UNRWA. The vast majority of reported casualties have been in the Gaza Strip. [11][12]. In December 2023, Euro-Mediterranean Human Rights Monitor estimated 90% of the casualties were civilians,[13][14] while the IDF put the civilian ratio at 66% of those killed.[15] The death toll comes from the Gaza Health Ministry and the total death toll in Gaza is presumed to be higher than reported,[16][17] with thousands remaining unaccounted for, including those trapped under rubble.[12][18]
These figures have been though repetitely challenged and found incoherent and untrustworthy by multiple sources, partly because of the control that Hamas has on the Gaza Health Ministry. [1] The Washington Institute for Near East Policy released in Jan. 2024 an analysis of the data which stated, among other things, that the claim that 72% of the dead are women and children is false and the data were manipulated to exaggerate the proportion of civilian casualties. [2] Professor Abraham Wyner published a statistical study on the anomalies of the provided figures from the Gaza Ministy of Health, underlining an excessively regular progression in the reported casualties and a lack of correlation between the number of women and children victims, concluding that "the numbers are not real". [3] [4] [5] President Biden himself claimed that he has "no confidence in the number that the Palestinians are using." [6] [7]
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The data offered by the Gaza Health Ministry have been often questioned by multiple sources and found incoherent.
The validity of the data reported by the Ministry of Health is firstly questioned because of its ties with Hamas, which makes it remarkably not neutral. Hamas appointed its own health minister after it took control of Gaza in 2007, separating the ministry from the Palestinian Health Ministry in the West Bank (which is controlled by the Palestinian Authority) and firing the doctors linked to Fatah. “After I was dismissed they threatened to kill me, to shoot me, if I entered the hospital again”, said Jomaa Alsaqqa, former deputy director of Shifa Hospital. "About 600 doctors were fired or pushed out of their jobs." [8] [9]
The Washington Institute for Near East Policy released a report at the end of January 2024 that attempted to show some of the discrepancies in the official fatality report's figures, and states that "The repeated claim that 72% of the dead are women and children is very likely incorrect" and that the data were manipulated "to downplay the number of militants killed and to exaggerate the proportion of noncombatants confirmed as dead". It also claims that the war has decreased in intensity. [10]
In March 2024 Abraham Wyner, professor of statistics and data science of Wharton, published a piece on Tablet Magazine after analyzing the numbers of casualties reported by the Ministry of Health in Gaza and denounced an "extremely regular increase in casualties over the period" and the fact that "the daily number of children reported to have been killed is totally unrelated to the number of women reported", rather than closely tied as it happens in war scenarios. The analysis would suggests that "the numbers are not real" and were instead fabricated by the Palestinian Authority. [11] [12] [13]
The Gaza Ministry of Health also admitted that the figures the media treat as authoritative rely in part on reporting from the media. The ministry says that the reported casualties include not only those counted in the hospitals but also those reported by "reliable media sources". In its March 31 report, the ministry attributes 15,070 of the dead, or 45.9%, to news reports of unspecified origin but that likely include the Hamas-controlled Al-Aqsa channel and Al-Jazeera, which has always mantained an hostile attitude toward Israel since the start of the war and denies the 07 Oct. massacre. [14] Alves Stargazer (talk) 20:02, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Wyner's 'study' is badly manipulated statistics using his reputation for propaganda, that's why no reliable non-Israeli place uses them, see [5]. The The Washington Institute for Near East Policy is another of these endless Israeli propaganda sources in the US and the stuff in that is slanted and misses out a lot, it should at least be described as that rather than giving the impression it is independent. They Ministry do ask for details of all the deaths reported and try and get id numbers and names etc but there are very few people doing the statistics.
- So a no from me for a straight insertion. Yes the Euro-Mediterranean Human Rights Monitor estimate of 90% is almost certainly too high. The IDF figure of 66% is total rubbish. The only guesstimate I've seen from any actual reliable source so far is as much as perhaps 80% but really nobody knows. And I'm pretty certain the Health Ministry is recording less than two thirds of the actual deaths even with its web forms. NadVolum (talk) 21:46, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
- Lior Patcher from [6] only contests the first plot in Wyner's study, the regular progression; he finds no fault nor explanation to the others analyzed anomalies (no correlation between women and children deaths, negative correlation between men and women, resurrections among men), as himself clarified in the comments.
- The Washington Institute for Near East Policy may be indeed not neutral but this whole page is not neutral as of now. Every figure used in this page, even those reported by prestigious newspapers as the NYT, can be traced back to the Gaza Health Ministry, which is not just Hamas-Controlled and therefore partial (see [7][8]) but also admitted of using media reports as sources for half of the reported deaths, likely anti-Israelian media [9]. So either we add some contradictory or we need to erase the whole page and wait ten years before making a chronicle out of it because at this point it's misinformation.
- Also, what does it mean that "the IDF figure of 66% is total rubbish"? Was that your personal opinion? If Israel and the IDF offer their numbers (which btw include the deceased terrorists, which should be added at a certain point in this page) we should just report them specifying the source.
- That said, what do you think it should be edited to make it a suitable insertion? Alves Stargazer (talk) 11:17, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- Other people contributed to the Lior Patcher thread. He was very dismissive of Wyner's study. If you read further on a probable explanation of the anti-correlation you talk about is that they batched the checking so they did children, men and women separately rather than trying to deal with each as they came in and it took about two days for a turnaround. It says there were only four people checking the data from the various sources. As to the 66% please see [10], the 66% is probably a rounded version of 61% from an Israeli University study which counted all adult men as possible combatants - a fairly common thing in these studies but unfortunately one which is easy to misunderstand. Since men form nearly a quaer of the population and Hamas is a small minority one should add another third to that to get 81% civilians. That could vary as many militants aren't counted as they are buried under rubble, on the other hand civilian men are killed disproporionately in wars. Anyway I hope you can see the 66% is total rubbish. Of course Wikipedia will cite total rubbish especially in an article like this where there are no well determined and solid facts so possibly some of what you say could go in but if you are believing that the deaths are lower than what the Health Ministry says or the figure is 2:1 civilians to militants and this is a marvellous achievement you are sadly mistaken. NadVolum (talk) 13:13, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
- I am less interested in believing and more in keeping the article neutral, since at this point it's mostly Hamas propaganda. Every Israelian-related source is specified, yet every Hamas tie is omitted from Hamas-tied sources and expressed as objective truth. The lack of transparency is going to led people unwilling to dig through link chains to believe that these numbers are factual, rather than coming from not-neutral sources. Generally speaking, though, I'm not really prone to give a lot of credibility to an internationally recognized terrorist organization.
- At the very least I'd start changing the first paragraph with something more transparent. Let's say, we could replace: "The vast majority of casualties have been in the Gaza Strip: over 33,091 have been killed, 70% of them are women and minors. In December 2023, Euro-Mediterranean Human Rights Monitor estimated 90% of the casualties were civilians, while the IDF put the civilian ratio at 66% of those killed."
- with: "The vast majority of casualties have been in the Gaza Strip: according to the Hamas-controlled[11] Gaza Health Ministry, over 33,091 Palestinians have been killed and 70% of them are women and minors, with no distinction between fighters and civilians. In December 2023, the Euro-Mediterranean Human Rights Monitor, which was listed by Israel among Hamas' main operatives and institutions in 2013[12], estimated 90% of the casualties were civilians, while the IDF put the civilian ratio at 66% of those killed. In March 2024, the IDF announced a total esteem of 13,000 Hamas members killed, in addition to the thousand already killed on 7th October. [13]"
- I believe this should give a more balanced outlook on the situation. Alves Stargazer (talk) 18:06, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia does not engage in WP:FALSEBALANCE. The IDF figures it gives to the public are all over the place [14]. Internally they use the figures from the Gaza Health Ministry [15]. That the state is terrorist or democratic has very little relation to whether data like this is reliable. NadVolum (talk) 19:20, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Mekomit [16] that you linked is part of the +972 Magazine which opposes Israelian occupation of Palestine and it's fringe activism journalism, no where near to claim that Israel uses the Health Ministry figures internally. IDF figures, Wyner's studies and the Washington Institute were all reported by large US newspapers and they are therefore relevant as per Wikipedia:BESTSOURCES. You just can't consider it a fringe theory if WSJ and Washington Post report it, especially since there is no difference with the Hamas-controlled Health Ministry figures that were reported in the already linked NBC, CNN and NYT articles;
- Lyor Patcher's objections and even worse the comments below the blog, instead, come from an unknown blog which is frankly impossible to consider reliable, as per Wikipedia:Reliable sources and undue weight. Which brings us back to the point that this page gives undue weight to Hamas and pro-Palestinian sources with no balance altogether.
- Let's further add that the Gaza Health Ministry numbers were only considered accurate for the period from Oct. 7 to 26, as per [17], which is the same source on the relative wiki page, and the mention that the WHO considered it relieble in [18] needs to be dated to the initial phase of the war. This does not keep into account the collapse of the Ministry of Health in November 2023 nor the fact that since then they admitted taking half of their figures from the media, not even the echo chamber among all the Hamas-influenced media.
- I'd also like to point out that you had no issue when someone edited the article adding obviously all-over-the-place data, like the 90% from the Hamas-controlled Euro-Mediterranean Human Rights Monitor, yet it suddenly became an issue for you the moment the added data attacked Hamas. I therefore have to ask to please stop gatekeeping; the data I intend to add has no lower quality of what is already included in the article. Alves Stargazer (talk) 17:41, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- I didn't object to the IDF figure of 66% being stuck in the lead either. It was reported by reliable sources and like the Euro-Med figure of 90% it is attributed to them. What I do object to is bad sources being used in such a blatant manner to discredit the Ministry of Health in the lead. All the Washington Institute shows is that the figures have some problems and errors, they do not show anything like what you state. One would need to ignore all the missing under the rubble and count nearly all the men as being Hamas militants to get anywhere like what you said or start saying the figures reported in the hospitals are much too high even though only three are still operating to some extent. Professor Wyner's article is rubbish and it is propaganda, there just is no two ways around it. Anyone with an ounce of training in statistics or even maths can figure that out. And it hasn't been reported in a reliable source. I am happy for it to be stuck somewhere lower down with the rest of the propaganda trying to push figures but putting it in the lead is just wrong. As to going on about an Israeli media group being anti-Israel and making thing up about the IDF I am put in mind of the Anti-Defamation League calling Jews antisemitic. NadVolum (talk) 17:58, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Apologies, but apparently someone vandalized this talk page removing my answer. So:
- The Ministry of Health and the Euro-Med are still not reported as Hamas-controlled, which makes those data really opaque on the side they're on. This needs to change ASAP. And the Euro-Med monitor should have never been mentioned at all, since it's an echo chamber for the radical Islamic world which is conceptually speaking as bad as a fallacious statistical study; and since Wyner's had an entire article from the Washington Post talking about it they are really on the same degree of relevance.
- In general terms the figures from the Ministry look fishy as hell. Last week Al-Jazeera reported two Israelian bombings with 22 and 20 dead, with 18 and 17 children dead respectively (the rest women) which makes just no sense unless the IDF is purposedly targeting kindergartens; which again makes no sense for a democratic country and they're likely made up. Since the Ministry admitted they've been using media data in their figures, just imagine how many of these fake reports have puffed the civilian casualties; but we don't don't have to imagine because that's exactly what the Washington Institute is talking about - they're making up women and children casualties to influence international opinion.
- The idea that most dead men are Hamas makes actually sense, because if the IDF strikes somewhere it's likely an Hamas base and the involved civilians are going to be the wives and children of said members, which are known to live around their husbands/fathers so they can be martyrs together. The IDF has also de-escalated the war since December, the idea of them still making thousands of random dead is absurd. About the +972 Magazine it is what it is, even the wiki page calls them left-winged and pro-Palestine; and since they leave complete freedom to their writers it really doesn't take much to write anti-Israelian articles, especially with two Palestinian journalist in their rooster. I am in no condition to evaluate what they say because I can't read Hebrew but I can recognize they're politically aligned in this.
- Anyway, I'd like to get to some point with this argument. Can we agree on some sources and edits or should I just ask to flag the page as non-neutral? Alves Stargazer (talk) 01:46, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- I didn't object to the IDF figure of 66% being stuck in the lead either. It was reported by reliable sources and like the Euro-Med figure of 90% it is attributed to them. What I do object to is bad sources being used in such a blatant manner to discredit the Ministry of Health in the lead. All the Washington Institute shows is that the figures have some problems and errors, they do not show anything like what you state. One would need to ignore all the missing under the rubble and count nearly all the men as being Hamas militants to get anywhere like what you said or start saying the figures reported in the hospitals are much too high even though only three are still operating to some extent. Professor Wyner's article is rubbish and it is propaganda, there just is no two ways around it. Anyone with an ounce of training in statistics or even maths can figure that out. And it hasn't been reported in a reliable source. I am happy for it to be stuck somewhere lower down with the rest of the propaganda trying to push figures but putting it in the lead is just wrong. As to going on about an Israeli media group being anti-Israel and making thing up about the IDF I am put in mind of the Anti-Defamation League calling Jews antisemitic. NadVolum (talk) 17:58, 26 April 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia does not engage in WP:FALSEBALANCE. The IDF figures it gives to the public are all over the place [14]. Internally they use the figures from the Gaza Health Ministry [15]. That the state is terrorist or democratic has very little relation to whether data like this is reliable. NadVolum (talk) 19:20, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
- Other people contributed to the Lior Patcher thread. He was very dismissive of Wyner's study. If you read further on a probable explanation of the anti-correlation you talk about is that they batched the checking so they did children, men and women separately rather than trying to deal with each as they came in and it took about two days for a turnaround. It says there were only four people checking the data from the various sources. As to the 66% please see [10], the 66% is probably a rounded version of 61% from an Israeli University study which counted all adult men as possible combatants - a fairly common thing in these studies but unfortunately one which is easy to misunderstand. Since men form nearly a quaer of the population and Hamas is a small minority one should add another third to that to get 81% civilians. That could vary as many militants aren't counted as they are buried under rubble, on the other hand civilian men are killed disproporionately in wars. Anyway I hope you can see the 66% is total rubbish. Of course Wikipedia will cite total rubbish especially in an article like this where there are no well determined and solid facts so possibly some of what you say could go in but if you are believing that the deaths are lower than what the Health Ministry says or the figure is 2:1 civilians to militants and this is a marvellous achievement you are sadly mistaken. NadVolum (talk) 13:13, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2048866/
- ^ https://www.washingtoninstitute.org/policy-analysis/gaza-fatality-data-has-become-completely-unreliable
- ^ https://www.tabletmag.com/sections/news/articles/how-gaza-health-ministry-fakes-casualty-numbers
- ^ https://www.jpost.com/israel-hamas-war/article-785742
- ^ https://podcasts.apple.com/ca/podcast/data-science-vs-hamas-math-with-abraham-wyner/id1539292794?i=1000651974580
- ^ https://www.reuters.com/world/middle-east/biden-says-he-has-no-confidence-palestinian-death-count-2023-10-26/
- ^ https://www.washingtonpost.com/world/2023/10/24/gaza-death-toll-palestinian-health-ministry/
- ^ https://www.washingtonpost.com/world/2023/10/24/gaza-death-toll-palestinian-health-ministry/
- ^ https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2048866/
- ^ https://www.washingtoninstitute.org/policy-analysis/gaza-fatality-data-has-become-completely-unreliable
- ^ https://www.tabletmag.com/sections/news/articles/how-gaza-health-ministry-fakes-casualty-numbers
- ^ https://www.jpost.com/israel-hamas-war/article-785742
- ^ https://podcasts.apple.com/ca/podcast/data-science-vs-hamas-math-with-abraham-wyner/id1539292794?i=1000651974580
- ^ https://www.wsj.com/articles/hamass-numbers-games-civilian-death-counts-casualty-data-b99140eb
Unclear what "tactics" refers to
In the Civilians section: "The high number of casualties is due to Israeli tactics and large-scale bombing, which in some cases has left entire towns completely destroyed and uninhabitable."
What are the "tactics" that, in addition to the large-scale bombing, have caused the high number of casualties? I am not disputing the validity of the sentence, I'm simply asking for clarity. - Mark D Worthen PsyD (talk) [he/him] 12:50, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- Good question. The citations don't seem to support it. How about The Guardian's https://www.theguardian.com/world/2024/feb/08/israeli-soldiers-idf-gaza-fighting-disaster-area ? NadVolum (talk) 15:33, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- This NYT piece also has a lot: https://www.nytimes.com/2023/11/25/world/middleeast/israel-gaza-death-toll.html BobFromBrockley (talk) 10:38, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
October 7th Israeli deaths revised number and citation
The article sat 1,139 deaths with no citation. That source appears to be https://www.france24.com/en/live-news/20231215-israel-social-security-data-reveals-true-picture-of-oct-7-deaths
However in February AFP revised this to 1,163 - see this Barron's article attributed to AFP: https://www.barrons.com/news/new-tally-puts-october-7-attack-dead-in-israel-at-1-163-78182279 Moschops42 (talk) 17:57, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
Age of adults
I’ve seen pro-Israel social media accounts claiming the Gaza MoH and UN figures for “adults” and “children” designate 19 year olds children (thus making some child fatalities plausible combatants). This seems unlikely to me, but is there a source confirming age counted as “child” and “adult” in that data that we can add to article? BobFromBrockley (talk) 09:29, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- They consider 19 year olds are adults and 18 year old are children. This is specified in both the Palestinian and UN sources. Just stick 'palestinian age of children' into Google and see for yourself. The Fourth Geneva Convention has special clauses for children under fifteen and eighteen years old. However Israel considers Palestinian and Israeli children differently, Israeli children are those under 18 and Palestinian children are those under 16, see Convention on the Rights of the Child. NadVolum (talk) 16:41, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- The Gaza MOH classes children as 0-18, based on their publications. It can be unclear, since they have often put out infographics which say "under 18" for children and "above 18" for adults (see [1] as a representative example from October), which doesn't clarify where they class 18-year-olds. However, in lists of names they released for children [2] and women [3] covering 10/7-4/30, you can see that the list for children includes 18-year olds while the list for women doesn't have anyone below 19.
- Because the UN is only republishing MOH figures, they are also classifying 0-18 as children and 19+ as adults. That differs from the Convention on the Rights of the Child (where children are under 18 or lower, depending on age of majority in State Party), but since the UN is only republishing MOH figures and not doing their own recategorization/analysis, it tracks to me.
- When talking about child combatants, children in their mid-teens could of course be combatants. Child soldiers in other conflicts have been under 10 in some cases (like DRC). But that's irrelevant to the fact that they are children, and the MOH does not distinguish civilians and combatants anyway.
- @NadVolum I don't see any reservation to that effect on Israel's treaty page with OHCHR, where their signatory/ratification status with human rights instruments are listed. The only reservations are on the CRC Optional Protocol on children in armed conflict, and they have to do with Israelis 17-18 registering for the military and what they are/aren't allowed to do. Where do you see a stipulation about Palestinians 16-17 being considered adults in the documentation?
- [1] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/4096
- [2] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5407
- [3] https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5409 ExVivoExSitu (talk) 22:21, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry yes, protected persons under the conventions include children of 0..17 years old, referred to as under 18 with majority to adults when they become 18. From those references it is obvious Hamas are also including 18 year olds as children, maybe they misunderstood what was required? Anyway 19 year olds are adults according to any definition which is what the post was about. Thankfully they don't use the Korean system for ages!
- I had a quick look again at the business of childrens ages as far as Israel is concerned and the complaints about that I found were twelve years old or older with nothing since which is long enough ago that I'm happy to presume they have chosen to fix that business. NadVolum (talk) 23:41, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
Error within Gaza Strip - Civilians Section
The last paragraph of this section states that "As of June 13, the UN reported that..." The article being referred to was released of May 13th, not June 13th. This is simply a minor error that can be quickly corrected. 174.198.7.192 (talk) 14:27, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
Pie chart errors
The pie chart incorrectly labels the categories as children under 15, men and boys above 14, women and girls above 14, and elderly. As discussed elsewhere on this talk page, the proper categories in accordance with MOH policy are children (0-18), adult men (19-59), adult women (19-59), and elderly (60+). The labels of the chart should be updated to reflect the correct categories.
The date for the data also needs to be set to April 30, 2024 -- if it makes everything gel better, a direct link to the OCHA report on May 8 might be better than the Reuters wire report. https://www.ochaopt.org/content/hostilities-gaza-strip-and-israel-reported-impact-day-215 ExVivoExSitu (talk) 22:59, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
"killed" vs "died"
As far as I can tell, the ubiquitous Ministry of Health numbers are reported to count all deaths recorded in Gazan hospitals, regardless of cause of death. If that's true, I don't think the word "killed" is appropriate when citing those numbers. On the other hand, sources tend to use that word uncritically. Probably because the MoH uses it? If some other body creates estimates based on those numbers, "killed" might be appropriate. Ornilnas (talk) 21:53, 20 May 2024 (UTC)
- On the other other hand, when people die, something, the cause, killed them. That something might by a bomb or sepsis or dehydration etc., but in any case, it killed them. This kind of argument doesn't only apply to MoH data, it applies to any instance of the word 'killed' in the article doesn't it, and there are almost 200 instances surrounded by a wide variety of words that hopefully reflect the language of the sources sampled. Sean.hoyland (talk) 03:31, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- In most instances, it's worded as something like "killed by the war". If it's worded "killed during the war", I guess you could argue it's technically correct, but super weird and misleading wording. Ornilnas (talk) 06:31, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- Another way of looking at it is that in order to be misleading something needs to be leading. The word killed is not intrinsically leading, it's just a statement of fact. Thinking something is 'misleading' may also indicate that a person has added information to a set of words by 'reading between the lines' and making assumptions about implied cause/blame etc., despite there being nothing between the lines. The thing that concerns me in situation like this is that assessments like sources 'tend to use that word uncritically' can be premised on the notion that editors can do better than sources when there is incomplete information. I hope, but have no idea whether it is the case, that those 200ish instances reflect the language of the sources, more or less, including the presence or absence of information about cause. Sean.hoyland (talk) 07:27, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think we're talking past each other. I'm saying the word "died" would be much more accurate than "killed", if my understanding of the number collection is correct. I agree that most sources use the word "killed", which limits our options. But it both degrades the quality of the article, and causes contradictions within it. Preferably, we would get a good and reliable source which clearly describes what the numbers actually mean, which we could then use to update the language in the article. Or, if we had separate estimates (based on the MoH numbers or not), we could use those instead. Ornilnas (talk) 07:47, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- Another way of looking at it is that in order to be misleading something needs to be leading. The word killed is not intrinsically leading, it's just a statement of fact. Thinking something is 'misleading' may also indicate that a person has added information to a set of words by 'reading between the lines' and making assumptions about implied cause/blame etc., despite there being nothing between the lines. The thing that concerns me in situation like this is that assessments like sources 'tend to use that word uncritically' can be premised on the notion that editors can do better than sources when there is incomplete information. I hope, but have no idea whether it is the case, that those 200ish instances reflect the language of the sources, more or less, including the presence or absence of information about cause. Sean.hoyland (talk) 07:27, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
- In most instances, it's worded as something like "killed by the war". If it's worded "killed during the war", I guess you could argue it's technically correct, but super weird and misleading wording. Ornilnas (talk) 06:31, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Incorrect date: June 13 should be May 13
"As of June 13, the UN reported that the 35,000 who have died in the conflict includes 7,797 children, 4,959 women and 1,924 elderly with confirmed identities."
It's still May, and the date on the article reads 05-13 Sturmundsonne (talk) 10:47, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
- Okay fixed that thanks. NadVolum (talk) 12:04, 22 May 2024 (UTC)
Request for comment on data which is known to be false on casualty figures still on wikipedia page
Most of the information about casualties is still based on the old Hamas numbers yet the UN have published revised numbers. Yet people keep removing the new numbers from UN and putting back the info from the old numbers as if they were fact.Patrick.N.L (talk) 16:38, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- The UN did not publish new numbers, they have a subset of fully identified deaths and those missing one or more fields in the tracked data. You also have no brief neutral question for an RFC here. ScottishFinnishRadish want to do something about this? Since my doing something would be frowned upon. See also #Revised casualties. nableezy - 17:38, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- De-RFC'd, thanks for the heads up. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 17:52, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- The UN did publish new numbers, the total casualties haven't changed but the division between men women and children has changed in a major way.
- After investigations the UN halved the amounts of kids and women killed which were grossly overstated. But then authors keep reverting edits to put the grossly inaccurate numbers and keeping numbers from sources that used Hamas reports instead.
- Putting information based on false data should not appear or should be clearly stated the casualty data for women and children were doubled. Patrick.N.L (talk) 22:22, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- That is absolutely false. All parts of it. The UN published numbers for fully identified bodies, and further said the total number of dead has not changed, only that a number of the dead do not have complete records. CNN: UN says total number of deaths in Gaza remains unchanged after controversy over revised data:The number was reduced because the UN says it is now relying on the number of deceased women and children whose names and other identifying details have been fully documented, rather than the total number of women and children killed. The ministry says bodies that arrive at hospitals get counted in the overall death count.UN spokesperson Farhan Haq told a daily briefing at the UN that the health ministry in Gaza recently published two separate death tolls – an overall death toll and a total number of identified fatalities. In the UN report, only the total number of fatalities whose identities (such as name and date of birth) have been documented was published, leading to confusion.According to Haq, the ministry published a breakdown for 24,686 fully identified deaths out of the total 34,622 fatalities recorded in Gaza as of April 30. The fully identified death toll comprises of 7,797 children, 4,959 women, 1,924 elderly, and 10,006 men, the UN spokesperson said, citing the Gaza health ministry.
The propaganda that you are pushing here had been directly refuted by the place you are claiming supports it. nableezy - 22:41, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- That is absolutely false. All parts of it. The UN published numbers for fully identified bodies, and further said the total number of dead has not changed, only that a number of the dead do not have complete records. CNN: UN says total number of deaths in Gaza remains unchanged after controversy over revised data:The number was reduced because the UN says it is now relying on the number of deceased women and children whose names and other identifying details have been fully documented, rather than the total number of women and children killed. The ministry says bodies that arrive at hospitals get counted in the overall death count.UN spokesperson Farhan Haq told a daily briefing at the UN that the health ministry in Gaza recently published two separate death tolls – an overall death toll and a total number of identified fatalities. In the UN report, only the total number of fatalities whose identities (such as name and date of birth) have been documented was published, leading to confusion.According to Haq, the ministry published a breakdown for 24,686 fully identified deaths out of the total 34,622 fatalities recorded in Gaza as of April 30. The fully identified death toll comprises of 7,797 children, 4,959 women, 1,924 elderly, and 10,006 men, the UN spokesperson said, citing the Gaza health ministry.
- They are not false casualty figures. The new figures shown are the number of casualties who have been fully identified. It is mostly but not fully a subset of the recorded deaths and the OCHA prefers using them, it does not say the other figures are false. This is something that needs resoluton okay but to describe what is happening properly using reliable sources and it is a bit complicated. NadVolum (talk) 17:46, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
(invited by the bot) As noted, there is no specific question here. Being a current event, with lots of sources, spin, bias etc. I think it would be put attribution (and avoid stating as fact in the voice of Wikipedia) and background with any numbers. Including "where did number come from?" Did that state the criteria and particulars? Who controls the entity that issued the number? And do put in numbers in places where that attribution and background can't be included. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 17:50, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- There is a specific question but i am new to this. Shouldn't we remove any casualty data known to be false following united nations accurate investigations or put a disclaimer that the casualties for children and women is actually half of what was previously reported.
- The problem is that historically credible sources used data which is now known to be false. After identifying 80% of bodies, the UN realized they doubled the amount of kids and women casualties by taking hamas reports. There is no debate on what's proven or not. The previous data was false regarding the division between women, men and children, even if they came from what is usually credible sources.
- Yes there are still 20% bodies still to be identified but they should match the same distribution as the known sample which is around 35 000. Even if 10k out of 45k is still unidentified, that wouldn't double the casualties of children and women.
- Any mention of casualties from Hamas prior to the un investigation should be have a disclaimer that the casualties for children and women are actually half of what Hamas reported.
- It's simply a matter of prudence. We should not put data which is confirmed to be gross misinformation. Patrick.N.L (talk) 22:37, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- The claim that any of this is "known to be false" is completely made up. The rest of the above comment continues along that same path. The UN did not identify any bodies, they are using the records from the Gazan Ministry of Health. You are making things up here, and are edit warring on the basis of that fantasy. nableezy - 22:44, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- Plus extrapolating from the number of identified men is rather fraught as they say that the forms system is used a lot by women to identify their dead husbands so they can receive assistance from the state. On the other hand many of the men may have been taken away by Israel or buried under rubble so may be a larger percentage among the missing. We should wait for some reasonably independent source with some expertise or better figures from the health ministry. I view the recorded deaths including media sources as probably a better source but still think it probably underestimates the children killed. NadVolum (talk) 19:37, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
Some cleanup: missing men, MOH/GMO mixups, registration, relative reports
- This sentence excludes the MOH-stated total for the number of men killed: "As of May 13, 2024 the UN reported that the 35,000 who have died in the conflict includes 7,797 children, 4,959 women and 1,924 elderly with confirmed identities." It should be revised to the following: "As of May 13, 2024 the UN reported that the 35,000 who have died in the conflict includes 10,006 men, 7,797 children, 4,959 women and 1,924 elderly with confirmed identities." Citation: The Reuters article already cited includes this information.
- This sentence miscites the MOH while using GMO figures (which should not be used since they conflict with MOH figures and the GMO does not have the capacity/authority to collect casualty data): "On 29 February 2024, Gaza's Ministry of Health reported that 44% (i.e. over 13,000) of the fatalities were children.[47]" It should be removed, and replaced by the following (or some form of it): "On 3 May 2024, Gaza's Ministry of Health reported that of 24,691 of those killed who are fully or partially identified, 31.6% (7,798) are children. The Gaza Ministry of Health defines children as those between 0 and 18, distinct from the UN definition, which includes those 0-17." Citation: https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/5401
- This passage is untrue during wartime: "Every death registered in Gaza is the result of a verified change in the population registry approved by the Government of Israel.[106] The Israeli government notes that its "Population Registry Office works to update population registry files located on the Israeli side to match the files that are held" in the West Bank and Gaza.[107]" It should be modified to "In peacetime, Every death registered...".
- This sentence remains incorrect, since the Google Form was launched in January and not March: "In March 2024, the Gaza Health Ministry requested that civilians register their dead online, as the healthcare system collapse had resulted in the ministry being unable to maintain a regularly updated death toll.[113]" It should be modified to "In January 2024, the Gaza Health Ministry requested that civilians register their dead online, as the healthcare system collapse had resulted in the ministry being unable to maintain a regularly updated death toll." Citation: https://t.me/MOHMediaGaza/4718
ExVivoExSitu (talk) 20:01, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
- Possibly #1 can be corrected. I don't see how #2 would be citable here. For #3, we cannot synthesize a new fact if that isn't already in the cited source. For #4 you are suggesting changing only the date of the Gaza Health Ministry's request, right? Based on a Telegram post? ~Anachronist (talk) 23:21, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- #1 is about civilians and men are counted as potential militants.
- #2 No misciting, All that has happened is that the UN now used confirmed identities. It has explicitly said that it is not disputing the other figures
- #3 Have we a cite saying Israwel won't check the registry against the spreadsheets the ministry provides because it is wartime?
- #4 It may be telegram which I dislike and I'd much prefer a better source but I'll stick it in. NadVolum (talk) 00:47, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- For #1 it is problematic to count all men as militants, to say the least. The Reuters article lists the entire demographic breakdown together: men, women, children, and elderly. Perhaps the location of the sentence is not ideal, but it does not make sense to only partially cite the demographics.
- For #2 I provided the Health Ministry source for their most up-to-date demographics, since the GMO is not the actual relevant authority for casualty recording and its number can't be reconciled with the Health Ministry. However, you could use the same Reuters article as #1 for a source. Citing the 0-18 definition is a different challenge and would require another source, agreed.
- For #3, can't the same question go in reverse? Why would the Health Ministry and Israeli government be communicating and exchanging death certificates during the war? All the given citations indicate is that there is such an arrangement in peacetime, and it is an assumption to state that things will work the same way during a war.
- For #4, @Anachronist you're right, just changing the date the call was first put out. There is probably a Facebook post I could find from the same day, but I assume that is probably worse for longevity than Telegram, and Telegram is the primary mode of communication for the media office anyway. ExVivoExSitu (talk) 01:20, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- For #3, see WP:SYNTH. We can't include something the source doesn't say, and the source says nothing about peacetime or wartime, just that deaths are registered. For #4, I guess between Facebook and Telegram, Telegram is better, so we just hold our nose while including the Telegram citation. NadVolum has done that. ~Anachronist (talk) 01:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
Understanding the casualty figures
There's been a lot of argument about the casualty figures. Something will have to be put in about them but unfortunately it is not straightforward. My understanding is
- The health ministry generates statistics on recorded deaths and identified deaths.[1] The say they try to only include those who die as a direct result of the conflict not those due to things like disease or old age.
- The missing are not included in the recorded deaths and is an estimation which doesn't seem to have a any methodology or expert doing it and is probably out of date.
- Israel have a policy of hiding dead militants so they can't be used as martyrs. This will make the count of deaths of men in particular rather difficult, but means the missing probably contains a higher proportion of men than the recorded.
- The recorded deaths are from dead bodies at hospitals and from trusted media including first responders.
- There is unlikely to be much duplication between the hospitals and the media sources
- The hospitals have gone down in importance as only three of the hospitals that did recording for morgues are still in action compared to the original eight.
- The identified are ones identified at the hospitals that do recording of deaths, or using forms filled in in a hospital, by one or the internet.[1]
- The identified ones are not necessarily ones whose deaths have been recorded. They may be ones that are counted as missing
- Identifying a death counts towards the number of identified but does not affect the count of recorded deaths.
- The ministry say the major use is by wives who want support when their husband is dead.[1]
- It could be useful to know if widows of militants need the GHM to record the death to get benefits.
- They say it also fulfills a purpose of closure by identifying the dead.
- Also said if a whole family is wiped out by a bomb they may not get to be identified.
- It might be possible to estimate the number of identified deaths which are for missing dead rater than recorded dead.
- The ministry subtracts the count of identified from the number of recorded deaths and talk about that as the number still to be identified but some of the identified are among the missing. The missing should eventually be recorded so eventually they will be right. However adding the missing would be a better estimate of the number left to identify.
- The missing are not included in the recorded deaths and is an estimation which doesn't seem to have a any methodology or expert doing it and is probably out of date.
- Professor Abraham Wyner's analysis[2] is deliberately twisted statistics. Fom an analysis I saw:[3]
- The variation is far higher than one would expect on the most straightforward supposition rather than being too small like he asserted.
- One can get close to the variation if on average eleven out of twelve of the bombs killed nobody and the twelfth killed on average six people. This would be just recorded deaths.
- The anti correlation on different days between men an women killed can be explained by the ministry taking a day to process each category of deaths as a block.
- The variation is far higher than one would expect on the most straightforward supposition rather than being too small like he asserted.
- The fighting where the IDF encounters Hamas seems from what I've read seems to mostly involve the occasional Hamas suddenly popping up and shooting and then disappearing if they can. They also set booby traps.[4]
- The demographics I believe is about 47% children, 25% men, 25% women, and 3% elderly.[5]
- I would expect the number of civilian men casualties to be the same or higher as that of the women and for the children casualties to be almost twice that of women. However recording is pretty much of a mess.
- From a discussion above the GHM seem from their spreadsheet to use ages 0..18 inclusive for children[6] rather than 0..17 which is what 'under 18' is supposed to mean in the Geneva Conventions. This is probably a mistake, I used the demographics of 0...14 and added a fifth for the 47% above which should approximate 0..17 fairly well.
- At the UN school in Nuseirat boys were sleeping in the mens room and girls in the womens room so there can be a difference in male and female children casualties.
- Anyway that is my understanding of the figures at the moment. A lot would be hard to get proper reliable citations for in anything like the form I've given. As you can see various bits are rather hard to explain or will give strange results, but how much is really missing for this article? I'm sort of inclined to put any methodology in the Gaze Health Ministry article and just put any figures here with a pointer there. Bit of a cop out I'm afraid. NadVolum (talk) 23:48, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think the methodology should indeed be in the Gaze Health Ministry article instead, with mainly a summary of that debate here.VR (Please ping on reply) 21:32, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ a b c van der Merwe, Ben (April 4, 2024). "Israel-Hamas war: Gaza's morgue network has effectively collapsed - how are they recording their dead?". Sky News. Sky News. Retrieved May 18, 2024.
- ^ "Hamas's Gaza death toll is exaggerated or faked, statistics expert claims". The Jerusalem Post | JPost.com. 14 March 2024.
- ^ "A note on "How the Gaza Ministry of Health Fakes Casualty Numbers"". Bits of DNA. 2024-03-08. Retrieved 2024-04-11.
- ^ Burke, Jason (8 February 2024). "'The destruction is massive … It's a disaster area': Israeli soldiers speak about fighting in Gaza". The Guardian.
- ^ "PCBS | H.E. Dr. Awad, highlights the Palestinian children's situation on the eve of the Palestinian Child Day, 05/04/2024". www.pcbs.gov.ps. PCBS Palestinian Central Bureau of Statistics.
- ^ "وزارة الصحة الفلسطينية/ غزة". Telegram.
Revised casualties
The UN citing the Gaza Ministry of Health has revised casualties. 1 2. The page will have to changed accordingly. - UtoD 04:43, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- It does state that 24,000 are identified. In the count it only includes the stats for the identified, while listing the total death toll including unidentified bodies (34,000). The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 07:04, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Fake news!!! Un has revised women and children deaths down 50pct 69.117.245.25 (talk) 18:53, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- Those lower figures are the ones that have been fully identified. Which is a bit silly as they can't verify the figures and that's not what they'd use if they could verify them. A lot of men are identified on forms because the women need support if their husbands are killed. I think only three hospitals are able to do identification now. The Gaza Health Ministry is very conservative with its figures and the actual number of deaths will be much higher. NadVolum (talk) 00:01, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Added non factual tag until corrections are made.Patrick.N.L (talk) 23:49, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
Any mention of casualty numbers provided by Hamas should be removed as non factual until confirmation by credible source. Moreover, hyperbolism about casualties should be avoided, and the use of new numbers should be done with prudence considering the amount of false information that has seeped into most major news outlet. https://www.yahoo.com/news/united-nations-cuts-estimates-women-170941270.html Patrick.N.L (talk) 23:48, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
The total figure remains unchanged. This is probably the fullest report so far on the update in how UN reports: https://www.cnn.com/2024/05/13/middleeast/death-toll-gaza-fatalities-un-intl-latam/index.html BobFromBrockley (talk) 03:32, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
I disagree with many of the edits by Patrick NL over the last hours: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Casualties_of_the_Israel–Hamas_war&diff=1223766173&oldid=1223751319 Several of the removed intances have not been refuted and are properly sourced, with claims attributed. I agree we shouldn’t use rolling news blogs and to be careful about attribution but these sweeping edits are excessive. BobFromBrockley (talk) 08:58, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- I am hopping over from the discussion section on the infobox page from the Israel-Hamas War article. This is meant as a helpful reply to everyone in this discussion post. There have been over 35,000 recorded Palestinian fatalities in the war so far. 24,686 of these have been identified and registered by hospitals and the Ministry of Health. The remaining are unregistered deaths from local media reports and fatalities with incomplete identification data. These are the facts. What numbers we use for the breakdown of each category of fatalities (men, women, children, elderly, etc.) is the question. The total numbers of fatalities for women (9,500) and children (14,500) the GMO uses would imply that all of those that are currently in the unidentified category are women and children if you do the math, which would be statistically highly unlikely, as the BBC, The Times Of Israel and other sources and users like @ExVivoExSitu have pointed out. If we are striving for accuracy, I think the most sensible thing is to include the most reliable data which are the identified fatality numbers for each category OR include both sets of fatality figures and make the distinction in the wiki article. Nathan1223 (talk) 10:38, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
- Ive reverted again, several highly tendentious additions were made, such as claiming false figures and that the estimates were cut in half. nableezy - 19:34, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
- The sources have a disproportionate number of children and women casualties have been refuted by the UN after its investigation. Previous estimates doubled the number of casualties for children and women.
- The conflict is evolving and so must the numbers. Like @Nathan1223 requested, the facts should be put forward and not old numbers that have been refuted by a UN investigation. Patrick.N.L (talk) 19:59, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Again, no part of your claim that
a disproportionate number of children and women casualties have been refuted by the UN after its investigation
is true, and the UN has specifically said that is not true. nableezy - 21:46, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
- Again, no part of your claim that
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Please change "In December, Israel's military said it estimated 66% of those killed to be civilians.[56]" to "In December, Israel's military said it estimated two out of three (~66%) of those killed to be civilians. IDF spokesperson Lt. Col. (Ret.) Jonathan Conricus described this ratio as "tremendously positive".[56]"
Alone, the value 66% conceals the possibility that this is a rough estimate. What the IDF views as an acceptable or favorable civilian to military ratio is extremely pertinent to this subject.
Also, the link to Reference 56 is broken. I believe the intended reference is: https://www.cnn.com/2023/12/05/middleeast/israel-hamas-military-civilian-ratio-killed-intl-hnk/index.html
Additionally: https://www.timesofisrael.com/idf-officials-2-civilian-deaths-for-every-1-hamas-fighter-killed-in-gaza/
I cannot find the original reference attributed to AFP. GammaDave (talk) 20:58, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- I've replaced the broken link with the one you gave. I didn't put in how its figure was tremendously positive, it's disgusting enough the lie as it is. NadVolum (talk) 22:43, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- Put in two thirds and second ref as well. NadVolum (talk) 08:07, 29 May 2024 (UTC)
Gaza health ministry losing count/lagging
Should it be mentioned that the Gaza health ministry death toll is starting to slow down, and that it is still stuck at the mid 30 thousands mark for months despite consistent bombardment?
something like how it is very much an undercount given that due to the destruction of the healthcare system the GHM has basically stopped counting The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 04:23, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- Have you got a reliable source? That's what's needed for things like that. Evene better if there is an analysis of why. Anything we did would otherwise just be WP:OR. NadVolum (talk) 12:46, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- There were many, especially old ones from November
- this is the most recent I could find from last month
- https://www.wsj.com/world/middle-east/in-gaza-authorities-lose-count-of-the-dead-779ff694 The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 04:11, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- They get counts from the media and first responders too now. It looks fairly good to me though it isn't as definitive as previously, I'd guess there's less than twenty thousand missing uncounted, they gave an estimate of ten thousand early on. There's a whole lot of problems and evidence of that but you said about the slowing down of the killing. I believe that has happened and it is actual rather than just apparent because the system has broken down, have you a citation either way for that? NadVolum (talk) 11:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- I don’t know if this is RS. It mentions Ralph Nader saying the death toll can be possibly as high as 200,000
- https://www.counterpunch.org/2024/05/31/you-cant-turn-back-the-clock-on-genocide-200000-deaths-in-gaza/ The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 07:17, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- The Gaza Health Ministry figures are for casualties due to the war, not disease famine old age or suchlike. There's probably some mixed in by mistake using media reports and responders but not much. Ralph Nader looks like he is including famine and disease from the war. Including those it still won't be anywhere like his figure yet, but the lack of food clean water and sanitation could rapidy turn the situation far worse. I feel sorry about those young Jews in America, they may be rejecting the ADL and Israel's ideas but they'll still be tarred by what is being done in their name. NadVolum (talk) 09:03, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- I'll put a link to Gaza Strip famine under the famine section. NadVolum (talk) 09:32, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- They get counts from the media and first responders too now. It looks fairly good to me though it isn't as definitive as previously, I'd guess there's less than twenty thousand missing uncounted, they gave an estimate of ten thousand early on. There's a whole lot of problems and evidence of that but you said about the slowing down of the killing. I believe that has happened and it is actual rather than just apparent because the system has broken down, have you a citation either way for that? NadVolum (talk) 11:13, 31 May 2024 (UTC)
- NadVolum, please read WP:NOTAFORUM. This is not the place for you to warn young American Jews or anyone else. Cullen328 (talk) 17:25, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- An appreciable amount of that article was about them, should it be cited without looking at it all? I was not warning anybody, I don't know where you get that idea from. There isn't very much they can do about it. NadVolum (talk) 17:41, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
- @NadVolum the reporting on the civilians to militants ration is wrong, the Arabs channels of PA itself report that 14000 of the Alaqsa brigade are counted in the total death toll, also is never mentioned that PA speaks about martyrs and not civilians, that is a translation for the English public.
- the resources in regards to the civilian to militant ration by the IDF are wrong as that is not an official statement due to counting and analysis. 2001:B07:6463:C039:9D19:A374:3FD7:F2D6 (talk) 10:22, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- I douldn't figure out what you were trying to say. Also we can't respond to anything on this contentious topic until a person is registerd and has contributed 50 edits or so. You can request a specific edit, please provide a citation to support any change you want. NadVolum (talk) 12:01, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- An appreciable amount of that article was about them, should it be cited without looking at it all? I was not warning anybody, I don't know where you get that idea from. There isn't very much they can do about it. NadVolum (talk) 17:41, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
Missing information on some statement's real origin
Under Gaza Strip->Civilians, concerning the last paragraph: "As of 13 May 2024, the U.N. has reported that the 35,000 who have died in the conflict includes 7,797 minors, 4,959 women and 1,924 elderly with confirmed identities. 52% of those killed are women and minors, and 40% are men; the U.N. does not differentiate between combatant and civilian deaths."
There is some information missing (check ref 42 for this, (https://reliefweb.int/report/occupied-palestinian-territory/gaza-war-un-revises-death-toll-women-and-children , just in case the number changes).
The last part cites the UN numbers: "52% of those killed are women and minors, and 40% are men; the U.N. does not differentiate between combatant and civilian deaths."
However, the reference clearly states that the UN clearly relies on the Hamas-run health ministry's numbers, which is a much less trustworthy/legitimate source, considering their direct involvement in the conflict.
This is why I propose rewriting the aforementioned paragraph to something like "As of 13 May 2024, the U.N., relying on numbers published by the Hamas-run Gaza health ministry, has reported..." to make that clear. Teegrube (talk) 17:21, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
- I think the numbers the health ministry publishes are pretty reliable. They have been in the past, and even independent investigations have always come to more or less the same numbers as the Hamas-run agencies. (see: https://theweek.com/defence/how-trustworthy-are-the-gaza-health-ministrys-casualty-numbers, https://learningenglish.voanews.com/a/how-reliable-are-gaza-health-ministry-s-death-numbers/7343831.html).
- In my personal opinion, I think it is much more likely that the reported number of deaths is less than the actual casualties, especially when thinking about the destruction caused by Israeli attacks, which leads to many bodies not being found. 2A01:599:923:631C:ECEA:B292:5CC2:4CD3 (talk) 07:04, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- See Talk:Israel–Hamas war#"Hamas-run. Sticking in 'Hamas-run' is a propaganda tactic to dehumanize the deaths of Palestinians and the attribution is totally unnecessary. NadVolum (talk) 08:17, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
- By the way we have to stick by the 52% because that comes from the best source. But actually the percentages for identified deaths are probably rather wild because people can send in identifications, and a major use for that is so widows can claim support if their husbands have died. I've clarified where it was mention that it refers to identified casualties but not said why that is important. NadVolum (talk) 08:27, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
The 5% figure in the first sentence is misleading
"At least 5 per cent of the population in Gaza had been killed, severely injured or missing."
Is different from what is on the Wikipedia page: "at least 5% of Gaza's population has been killed, maimed or injured."
1. The source is being misquoted.
2. Missing figures should not be so prominent in a page about casualties. Undated (talk) 14:01, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- 6,400 people missing for several months, a large percentage undoubtedly under the rubble, valiantly strutting through which the IDF troops complain of the stench, of dogs with arms between their teeth, birds pecking on legs sticking disjointedly out from under collapsed masses of concrete, of road-cleaning IDF bulldozers shovelling them up whenever press or Red Cross visitors are accompanied, to make sure that, dumped on the side under dust and debris, they won't be visible that day, potential eyesores that spoil the Potemkin neatness of the roads burrowing through the jungle of 37 million tons of a wrecked and ransacked world. We are talking about the unburied, who are, in any man's language, casualties.Nishidani (talk) 16:50, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Because the last missing number reports from PCD (10,000) and MOH (7,000) are now 3 months old, it's impossible to know how many are still missing versus already included in July killed/injured numbers. But the 5% figure is roughly accurate without including missing anyway, depending on the count and pre-war baseline used. Caution re: tone. GordonGlottal (talk) 17:50, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- 6,400 people missing for several months, a large percentage undoubtedly under the rubble, valiantly strutting through which the IDF troops complain of the stench, of dogs with arms between their teeth, birds pecking on legs sticking disjointedly out from under collapsed masses of concrete, of road-cleaning IDF bulldozers shovelling them up whenever press or Red Cross visitors are accompanied, to make sure that, dumped on the side under dust and debris, they won't be visible that day, potential eyesores that spoil the Potemkin neatness of the roads burrowing through the jungle of 37 million tons of a wrecked and ransacked world. We are talking about the unburied, who are, in any man's language, casualties.Nishidani (talk) 16:50, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
186,000 dead, not may die
In the current article it says that 186,000 Palestinians may die according to the numbers in the Lancet. However, the text in the Lancet says that 186,000 may be dead, not that they may die in the future. Centurion Ernith (talk) 03:56, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think that's how it should be interpreted, see the preceding context:
Even if the conflict ends immediately, there will continue to be many indirect deaths in the coming months and years [...]
. - The main discussion is here. — xDanielx T/C\R 05:53, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
- I've also opened a discussion at RSN: Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard#Counting the dead in Gaza: difficult but essential. Elli (talk | contribs) 02:39, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
Women-and-children narrative
I believe that, at least in those situations where sources indicate exactly how many women and how many children died, there is no point in lumping them together into the vague “women and children.” What does 52% women and children mean? 32% children and 20% women are both clearer and less benevolently-sexist. Reprarina (talk) 21:14, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
shortcomings in the reactions and analysis section
The UN analysis is not well represented, i think quotes like this would clarify their assessment of the situation: "The overwhelming nature and scale of Israel’s assault on Gaza and the destructive conditions of life it has inflicted reveal an intent to physically destroy Palestinians as a group. "
"Genocidal acts were approved and given effect following statements of genocidal intent issued by senior military and government officials."
"Israel’s genocide on the Palestinians in Gaza is an escalatory stage of a longstanding settler colonial process of erasure. For over seven decades this process has suffocated the Palestinian people as a group – demographically, culturally, economically and politically –, seeking to displace it and expropriate and control its land and resources."
source: https://www.un.org/unispal/document/anatomy-of-a-genocide-report-of-the-special-rapporteur-on-the-situation-of-human-rights-in-the-palestinian-territory-occupied-since-1967-to-human-rights-council-advance-unedited-version-a-hrc-55/ 84.115.225.35 (talk) 20:36, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- Please read 'WARNING: ACTIVE ARBITRATION REMEDIES' at the top of the page. You are only permitted to make a specific edit request for the article, please supply a citation if you do so. NadVolum (talk) 20:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
- Sure.
- Current version:
- Reactions and analysis
- Both Israel and Hamas have been accused of committing war crimes. South Africa accused Israel of committing genocide in a case it brought before the International Court of Justice. In a set of preliminary rulings, the court found that the Palestinians rights under the genocide convention were plausibly in danger but did not rule on whether genocide was plausibly happening. In June 2024, a UN Commission of Inquiry found the scale of Israel's killing of Palestinians constituted a crime against humanity. Marwan Bishara, the senior political analyst at Al Jazeera English, argued that Israel's military campaign aimed to "eliminate anything that walks or breathes in Gaza".
- Suggested extension:
- Reactions and analysis
- Both Israel and Hamas have been accused of committing war crimes.
- South-Africa genocide case
- South Africa accused Israel of committing genocide in a case it brought before the International Court of Justice. In a set of preliminary rulings, the court found that the Palestinians rights under the genocide convention were plausibly in danger but did not rule on whether genocide was plausibly happening.
- UN Assessment
- In June 2024, a UN Commission of Inquiry found the scale of Israel's killing of Palestinians constituted a crime against humanity. Marwan Bishara, the senior political analyst at Al Jazeera English, argued that Israel's military campaign aimed to "eliminate anything that walks or breathes in Gaza".
- The UN report contains the following statements, outlining their analysis of the ongoing conflict:
- "The overwhelming nature and scale of Israel’s assault on Gaza and the destructive conditions of life it has inflicted reveal an intent to physically destroy Palestinians as a group. "
- "Genocidal acts were approved and given effect following statements of genocidal intent issued by senior military and government officials."
- "Israel’s genocide on the Palestinians in Gaza is an escalatory stage of a longstanding settler colonial process of erasure. For over seven decades this process has suffocated the Palestinian people as a group – demographically, culturally, economically and politically –, seeking to displace it and expropriate and control its land and resources."
- And somehow the link to https://www.un.org/unispal/document/anatomy-of-a-genocide-report-of-the-special-rapporteur-on-the-situation-of-human-rights-in-the-palestinian-territory-occupied-since-1967-to-human-rights-council-advance-unedited-version-a-hrc-55/ 84.115.225.35 (talk) 09:22, 22 July 2024 (UTC)
- In light of these facts, it is entirely disingenuous to refer to this genocide as "the Israel-Hamas war." The International Court of Justice has ruled the state of Israel has failed to disprove "plausible intent to commit genocide" and ordered Israel immediately cease all attacks upon Gaza and the West Bank in January 2024, which they have not. (https://www.icj-cij.org/node/203454) If the highest international court would call this a plausible genocide instead of a war, why does this article not reflect that? Vovbv (talk) 05:44, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
Graph Update Request
UN OCHA casualties summary, as of 19 June 2024 , please update. Drsruli (talk) 03:29, 14 August 2024 (UTC)
Auto-archiving period: 20 days
Please extend. Drsruli (talk) 03:29, 14 August 2024 (UTC)