Talk:Cartman's Mom Is Still a Dirty Slut/GA1
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Spiceitup08 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Spiceitup08 (talk • contribs • count) 19:53, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
Will be starting soon. --FeuDeJoie (talk) 19:53, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
- Ok so a few things have caught my attention the screenshot in the infobox's rationale is incomplete and incorrect.
- The introduction is too small and is need of a copy-edit.
- Saying that the entire article needs a substantial copy-edit.
- The plot is too long, and is very static to read. Grammatically parts are incorrect, generally it is pretty bad.
- A lot of the material is unsourced and needs to be sorted!
- It gives absolutely no information into the reception!
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