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I don't really see a need to put the commander in the lede
The Minnesota was not a gunboat
Comma after North Carolina, Virginia, Nansemond River
Link gunboat, scuttled on first use, flag of truce boat
Tell the reader than Rocketts Point is in Richmond
She had come under Union fire both after and immediately before the attack. awkward regarding chronology
Rather than say at an unknown time in mid-1864, I'd suggest just saying "in mid-1864"
Don't forget to incorporate the info from Holcombe that I sent you.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:44, 28 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Sturmvogel 66: - Thanks for the review! I couldn't find anything good to link flag of truce boat to, so I've just linked flag of truce. Gunboat is no longer in the article, so that is not linked. Everything else has been actioned. Hog FarmTalk 03:45, 29 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
Looks good, but the link for the Minnesota is a generic one and clarify that she's a steam frigate.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:30, 29 August 2023 (UTC)Reply