Talk:By Appointment Only (1933 film)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Elsquared in topic several grammar and spelling errors

several grammar and spelling errors

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I'm going to fix several spelling errors, and make slight changes to the grammar. No major changes at all. Elsquared (talk) 06:07, 19 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

I did make two other changes. I removed the reference to Judy as the doctor's "ward"; this is a legal term for someone placed under the care of a legal guardian. (I'm watching the movie now, and it makes no mention of a "legal guardian".) Second, I changed the wording of "Travers finally gives in" to "gives up"; perhaps a small point, but I think more descriptive, as Travers "gives up" his pursuit of Judy. Elsquared (talk) 06:17, 19 May 2013 (UTC)Reply