Talk:BuzzSaw (roller coaster)

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DateProcessResult
January 27, 2013Guild of Copy EditorsCopyedited
June 11, 2013Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

Missing section edit

Shouldn't there be a Reception section which covers how well the ride has been received by the public? - Shiftchange (talk) 13:29, 22 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

Yes there should. However, due to the lack of reliable sources a reception section like this would not be possible. I could write a section with the following information, but I am not sure whether it would necessarily be sufficient:
Thoughts? Themeparkgc  Talk  23:09, 22 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
  Added to the article. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:02, 23 March 2013 (UTC)Reply
Much better. Its important because these rides are added to attract people, obviously. Knowing if it succeeds in that respect or if people aren't satisfied by it rounds out the article nicely. Keep up the good work. - Shiftchange (talk) 23:15, 23 March 2013 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 13:57, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    Pass! Good work!--Dom497 (talk) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Comments edit

  • Not really a major issue but are there any pictures of the actual ride that can be used in the article?--Dom497 (talk) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
None that are freely available. Themeparkgc  Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • The ride no longer the second tallest inversion....now its the third. You might need to change the refs with change as well.--Dom497 (talk) 14:20, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Shouldn't the marketing section be sub-section of the history section?--Dom497 (talk) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Don't use "BuzzSaw" at the beginning of each paragraph in the characteristic section!--Dom497 (talk) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "BuzzSaw's steel roller coaster track is 150 metres (490 ft) in length." - Maybe incorperate this sentance with the firs paragraph in the same section? It doesn't look right when its all alone :( .--Dom497 (talk) 14:16, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • Be more specific on the roller coaster model. SkyLoop has 5 "sub-models".--Dom497 (talk) 14:18, 9 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  07:35, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

All good!--Dom497 (talk) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

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