Talk:Butterfly (Kylie Minogue song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:22, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• Its release date should have a note regarding the song's initial press release for clubs

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Lead

• Light Year → Light Years

Silly mistake. Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Background and recording

• Remove Steve Anderson's picture, doesn't add much detail to the article.

Steve is the co-writer of the track—I don't see any reason to exclude his pic here. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

Removed Steve's pic since the article is already packed with two other pics Damian Vo (talk) 03:03, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

• he composed the track on a piano and it started off as a ballad. → the track, which was composed on a piano, started off as a ballad

Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• He recorded a demo of the track, which has drums, bass and Minogue's vocals on it → He recorded a demo of the track with drums, bass, and Minogue's vocals on it

Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Composition and release

• which has a runtime of 4:09 → remove

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• and delivered lines such as "When I'm in your arms/I am safe from harm" → remove

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• Parlophone released "Butterfly" → Parlophone included "Butterfly

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• Light Year → Light Years

Not again T.T Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• production group → English dance music production group

Added. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• Due to a manufacturing error, a replacement cover insert was included in the maxi single release → the source stats "along with a really stunning & sexy 12" x 12" glossy print of the green variant artwork", quite different

Removed this sentence. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Reception and live performances

• Fine

Track listings

• Use spaced en dash,  –

Added template. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Personnel

• Use spaced en dash,  –

Added template. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Chart

• Use Template:Single chart

Using the template would produce something like this rather than this. This is the only way that I could use the Harvard citation template for the entire article. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

Ok I get, makes sense. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:25, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Release history

• It is missing the November 2001 date

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• Add wheter the version is original or remixes

All of them are remixes – the original was never released as a standalone single/side-A only, as you could see in the "Track listings" section. 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

References

• Flawless
• A source check was conducted on "Transitions: Milestone", "Kylie.com A", "Singles: Butterfly", "Butterfly (Media notes; maxi single)", "Mark Picchiotti Interview". Turn The Beat Around and Bent 2009

External links

• I would move the audio source to the infobox as misc

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

• Remove the other two sources, one of them is already on the article. I would avoide using Discogs as a list of release

Is there any particular reason to remove the Discogs link? To my understanding, the 'external links' section is supposed to list helpful sites but somehow could not use it as the main source (mainly user-editable sites, self-published sources etc.) While films-related articles could list database sites like IMDb in their sections, I think it's fair that music articles could at least have the Discogs release list for further reading. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

What further reading are you going to do there? Release date? Is already in the article MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:20, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Removed. Damian Vo (talk) 14:47, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Overall

• Seven days to address the issues. Let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:09, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
• Are we sure these sales in the Uk are from areliable source? I mean the its the producer who is reporting them

Picchiotti is not only the producer of "Butterfly" but also the founder of Blueplate Records, the track's distributor in the US and the UK white label release. Therefore I think his statement regarding the single sales for "Butterfly" is acceptable. Sales statements from labels, not from the independent tracking firms like Nielsen or IFPI, can be found in articles like here ([1]) Damian Vo (talk) 02:37, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Labels have a tendency to influent sales number as we all know. Henceforth they are not acceptable in various articles, the source you provided states those numbers are according to the label. I'm not saying that Picchiotti is lying, only that there is no reason to believe he is saying the truth either. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:29, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

Removed. Damian Vo (talk) 14:47, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Not entirely, "According to Picchiotti, more than 15,000 double twelve-inch vinyl sets were sold within the first two weeks of release" MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:51, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Removed. Damian Vo (talk) 16:51, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

I made small changes, see if you agree with them. If so, I will pass the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:53, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for shortening the caption perfectly :D Damian Vo (talk) 13:25, 8 June 2022 (UTC)