Talk:Burning at Both Ends/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:01, 21 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt

Lead

• of the month due to bad weather → of the month due to bad weather to finish the album
• Add the Dead Press! year end list addition

Background and recording

• McTernan, who also acted as the engineer, was assisted Paul Leavitt → missing "by" and the latter worked as an enginner or in production?
• Tracking → Recording
• following on January 8. → followed on January 8
• assisted by Kyle Black → same issue as before
• Try to have the sources at the end of the sentences it breaks the reading
• tracking → recording

Composition

• with the exception of "Calaveras", which is credited to the band. → on the track list says it is to Mikey Ambrose the writting
• Like a Virgin Saved by the Bell and The Goonies → years of release
• "Calaveras" is written by drummer Mikey Ambrose → add it to the first point I make and remove it from the last setence

Release

• The sources that are mid-sentece try to move them to the end of a sentence
• before being released on June 28 through Epitaph Records → source?
• bonus track[26] → move the source to the end of the sentence
• Between June and August, → Between June and August of 2011,

Reception

• number 27 on Independent Albums,[50] → move the source to the end of the sentece
• AllMusic → second paragraph
• Rock Sound → first paragraph
• Dead Press! → should be in the first paragraph but the review is quite negative, despite the eight starts, you can choose other instance of the review that is more positive and them move it.

Track listing

• Fine

Personnel

• Fine

Charts

• Fine

References

• AllMusic source is dead
• Noisecreep → publisher
• WP:ALBUMAVOID "An artist's social networking site, such as Facebook or Twitter, in addition to personal blogs and forum posts, should largely be avoided. If the information being added from one of these websites is truly notable enough for inclusion, a publication will likely report about".

It's acceptable per WP:SOCIALMEDIA. Yeepsi (talk) 20:46, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

@Yeepsi: Archive them, as they can go dead at any given time. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:27, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Done. Yeepsi (talk) 07:32, 23 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall

• Don't address any comment until I say so.

Done. Yeepsi (talk) 21:07, 22 April 2020 (UTC)

It's a pass. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:57, 23 April 2020 (UTC)