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editI undid some well-meaning changes of wording by Cinder painter (talk · contribs).
- but with more contrast, bolder, narrower and
withsharper serifs : There are four distinctions listed here:- with more contrast
- bolder
- narrower
- with sharper serifs
- and removing the second with improperly shifts two adjectives from the face as a whole to the serifs.
- The Bulmer typeface fell out of interest ..., but returned to interest : Changing "but" to "Still, it" unnecessarily suggests that the return was surprising.
- Uppercase italic characters J, K, N, T and Y
haveflourishesreminiscent of Baskerville's. : "Flourish" as a verb is awkward here and possibly misleading.
- It features text and display optical sizes : Changing "display" to "displays" shows a misunderstanding. Follow the link to see why.