Talk:Bukit Panjang MRT/LRT station/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:06, 3 September 2020 (UTC)Reply


Comments

  • Lead tells us where it's "located" twice, I understand why but the repeat of "is located" is jarring.
  • "the Downtown line station" use the abbreviation.
  • BP6 and DT1 are noted in the infobox but not explained or referenced anywhere.
  • "with the artwork" reads odd. Either remove "the" or explain more about what "the" artwork is.
  • "Bus, Taxi" no need for capital T.
  • BPLRT why isn't it BPLRTL i.e. with an L for line, like DTL?
  • "The station opened..." avoid single-sentence paragraphs.
  • "10,000 regular" avoid starting sentences with numbers.
  • No information about the construction? Just straight in with when it opened, seems incomplete.
  • "failure on the evening of 29 August 2001" -> "failure the previous evening" would suffice.
  • "at 10:15 am later that day" it wasn't later that day, it was the following day.
  • " Half-Height Platform Barriers were installed on the LRT Platforms. " why all the capitalisation?
    •   Fixed removed capitalisation
  • "Downtown Line" suddenly a capital L for line?
  • Image captions are fragments so don't need full stops.
  • "When questioned" by whom?
  • " the Downtown line trains" use the abbreviation.
  • "The Contract 912 for" no need for The.
  • " S$452.4 million" translate into something like US$
  • "massive" bit POV.
  • "work for Downtown line 2 is being carried out" was
  • " construction site for the Downtown line in the" use the abbreviation.
  • What happened to the sinkhole? You move quickly onto a fire.
  • "opened on 9 February 2018" why late?
  • "The artwork showcases an impressive row of tall HDB... " sounds like a guidebook.
  • " ranges between" range, frequencies is plural.
  • "The DTL station is not directly connected " it feels like this is the third time I've read this.
  • "station is[28][29] " something missing.
  • Spaced hyphens in ref titles need to be en-dashes.
  • Ref 4 is tagged as dead.
  • Compare ref 7 and 8, The Straits Times is a work.
  • Some sources you have LTA, others you have www.lta.gov.sg, aren't they one and the same?
  • I also see eresources.nlb.gov.sg where previously that was www.lta.gov.sg.
  • Ref 25 missing access and/or publication date.

That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 09:06, 3 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

@The Rambling Man: any further updates on this?--ZKang123 (talk) 11:40, 9 September 2020 (UTC)Reply
All is just swell, I've promoted. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 12:17, 9 September 2020 (UTC)Reply