Talk:Built for the Kill

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PROBLEMS WITH THIS ARTICLE edit

This article, in addition to a total lack of citations, reads like a fan's review. It is littered with personal opinion rather than fact. For example:

"Built For The Kill uses a graphical approach to catch the audiences attention, and it works"

"This graphical approach to a nature documentary makes Built for the Kill very interesting to watch"

"Built for the Kill's classic opening..."

"a catchy theme song"

The sentence "it is more fast paced and graphical than the David Attenborough series" appears to be little more than the author attempting to give this series favour over the more famous offerings from David Attenborough and is thus inappropriate; if it is supposed to be highlighting a more than usual pace and graphical quality it should at least say "...than, for example, the David Attenborough series". Even this would be rather vague, as Attenborough has made many series.

The author could improve this article by referring - and adhering - to the WIkipedia advice on writing articles.

Tarquin Q. Zanzibar 22:20, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

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