Talk:Bryant & Stratton College/Archive 2

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Updating Bryant & Stratton article with recent images and information about women

There is at least one image that in Wikimedia Commons that we could add. It could be placed with the section on sports. Bryant & Stratton also has a long history of career training for women. I posted information about this in the article, but it was removed.01:31, 16 June 2019 (UTC)CollegeMeltdown (talk)

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Possible vandalism

The page for Bryant & Stratton College was woefully inadequate and outdated. Updated a significant amount of information that was removed by 2a02:1205:5013:cca0:e0f0:1e92:ad9:ce30 without a discussion. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 21:41, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

Hello User CollegeMeltdown, I already got in touch with you on your user talk page. In case you haven't seen my comment, I am posting to you here: I am sure your edits on Bryant & Stratton College happened in good faith. However, there are many issues with your edits: It is honorable that you attempt to contribute as much as possible but sometimes, less is more. The vast majority of your edits are either outdated, irrelevant or both (e.g. average salaries of students, average student loan payments, popularity of majors, (old) student numbers for individual campuses etc.). Also, you should pay attention not to excessively list information (rather prose) and not majorly simply copy information from the sources. Your edits also caused errors in the reference section. This is why I will revert your edits. For further information on my reasoning, please see the following Wikipedia policies and guidelines: WP:NOTSTATS, WP:IRRELEVANT, WP:LISTDD, WP:PROSELINE, WP:EXCESSDETAIL, WP:REF, WP:COPYPASTE, WP:UNIGUIDE, WP:NOTCATALOG, WP:DISRUPT. Thanks.2A02:1205:5013:CCA0:E0F0:1E92:AD9:CE30 (talk) 21:34, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

Hello User: 2A02:1205:5013:CCA0:E0F0:1E92:AD9:CE30,I disagree with your opinion that the information is "either outdated, irrelevant or both." The older page read like an outdated advertisement. College Scorecard data and information about the school in 2019 are relevant. These are the most up to date numbers from NCES and the 2011 numbers are added to show the campus population declines. The enrollment losses at ground campuses are significant and the change in ownership, from family owned to private equity owned, is significant. I also included important information on the academic programs and sports. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 21:50, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

Please decide where you want to discuss: On this talk page or on your user talk page. I gave you an explanation for my reasoning on here and on your user talk page. I will revert and restore my version as per my first post to you and according to the Wiki policies and guidelines I stated in my first post and in my edit summary.2A02:1205:5013:CCA0:E0F0:1E92:AD9:CE30 (talk) 22:01, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

We should talk on this page. If all of these entries are removed, I have to wonder, what is the purpose of Wikipedia? Is it supposed to be read like an Encyclopedia Brittanica from 1960? Go ahead, and whitewash the page per Wikipedia guidelines; I can't stop you. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 22:04, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

I restored this portion for documentation. Not sure where I went wrong with missing a signature. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 15:05, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

Things that were deleted from Bryant & Stratton story

Rather than have all of my entries removed by an anonymous source again, here are some highlights from the Bryant & Stratton story that were deleted:

Parthenon Capital Partners, a private equity firm, was an an investor in Bryant & Stratton from 2008 to 2017.CollegeMeltdown (talk) 19:37, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

Timeline:

• (1867) Mr. Stratton died, and according to Ohio History Central, this prompted the decline of the chain schools.
• (2009) Bryant & Stratton Limited Partnership and the other minority shareholders sold portions of their stock to Parthenon Capital Partners, a private equity company.
• (2015) Cleveland.com reported that the Bryant & Stratton location in Cleveland had the lowest college graduation rate in Ohio.
• (2017) Bryant & Stratton Limited Partnership regained a controlling interest in the school. The ownership change was approved by the New York State Board of Regents.
• (2018) The downtown Milwaukee campus was closed in August. The Cleveland campus was relocated to Solon in October. The new campus has a nursing and occupational therapy assistant lab, a student union with a library, and an athletics program, which includes interscholastic men's and women's basketball.
• (2019) Bryant & Stratton included competitive esports to their sports programs and became members of NACE.

Faculty: Bryant & Stratton's online faculty consists of 30 full-time instructors and 407 part-time instructors. The Buffalo campus has 16 full-time instructors and 47 part-time instructors.

Student body: According to the College Scorecard, Bryant & Stratton online is 52% White, 36% Black, 6% Hispanic, 4% Two or more races, 1% American Indian/Alaska Native, and 1% Asian. Eighty one percent receive federal student loans. In 2016-17, 113 veterans used the GI Bill for the online campus and 6 servicemembers used Department of Defense Tuition Assistance for the online campus. Five veterans used GI Bill funding at the Buffalo campus in 2016-17.

Headcounts in 2017 (and 2011)

• Bryant & Stratton College-Akron 88
• Bryant & Stratton College-Albany 371 (845)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Amherst 282 (565)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Bayshore 353 (391)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Buffalo 491 (954)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Cleveland 263 (1000)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Eastlake 238 (975)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Greece 217 (422)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Hampton 303 (96)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Henrietta 184 (522)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Milwaukee 152 (1071) [downtown Milwaukee closed 2018]
• Bryant & Stratton College-Orchard Park, NY, Online 4114
• Bryant & Stratton College-Parma 354 (856)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Richmond 675 (924)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Southtowns 418 (1749)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Syracuse 439 (769)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Syracuse North 258 (627)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Virginia Beach 484 (838)
• Bryant & Stratton College-Wauwatosa 781 (942)

Student outcomes According to the College Scorecard, Bryant & Stratton's graduation rate ranges from 6 percent in Cleveland, Ohio to 37 percent in Amherst, New York. Average salary after attending is $24,100. Typical debt after graduation is $23,055 and the typical student loan monthly payment is $245. The student loan repayment rate is 19 percent.CollegeMeltdown (talk) 03:07, 9 June 2019 (UTC)

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Receiving legal threats from legal representative of Bryant & Stratton College

On June 17, 2019, I received an email from someone claiming to be a legal representative for Bryant & Stratton College (BSC). The person added that "We expect that you refrain from editing our institution's Wikipedia page and rectify (i.e. revert) all of your contributions by Thursday, June 20 2019, 02:00 pm EST. Should you fail to follow our request, we will take legal action."

The allegations were:

• Adding material which strongly suggests BSC is a diploma mill although it is accredited.
• Linking terrorists to BSC.
• Representing BSC as a failing business.
• Adding statements that BSC engages in unethical and fraudulent activities.
• Publishing private and intimate details about BSC's executives and owners.

I believe I can refute each of these specific claims.

• BSC has been mentioned in a scholarly book (by AJ Angulo) about the history of for-profit education.
• Timothy McVeigh, an American domestic terrorist, attended and dropped out of BSC. I did not add any additional terrorists, but one crime boss was already listed under "Notable Alumni".
• Most BSC's campuses have been losing money, at least from the most recent NCES data. However, I do not recall posting anything on Wikipedia about this.
• I'm not sure I understand what the lawyer means by "personal and intimate" details about the institution's executives and owners. I do know that the President of BSC has a DM from University of Phoenix. Anything that I have written is based on publicly retrieved information.

In addition, I have added a great deal of updated information about BSC. WP:Free speechCollegeMeltdown (talk) 14:42, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

The legal representative for Bryant & Stratton College has given me three options before filing a class action suit against me in three days.

• 1: You provide us with your Wiki account login details and a member from our IT team will do the revision.
• 2: We will attempt to give you instructions.
• 3: We could enforce the revision on Wikipedia. This may mean the revelation of your identity on Wikipedia as well as the conflict of interest you have in the matter.

The lawyer adds that other parties may be involved in the lawsuit. WP:Free speechCollegeMeltdown (talk) 18:25, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

I recommend dropping a note at WP:ANI so Wikipedia administrators are aware of this. ElKevbo (talk) 18:55, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

ElKevbo, thank you for the good advice. Just posted it. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 19:05, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

Of course, options 1 and 2 are against Wikipedia policies on sharing of accounts and meatpuppetry. Option 3 depends on how they approaching things; if they mean legal threats or action against the WMF, they are free to do so; if they mean direct editing, they would be running afoul of WP:PAID.

Should they be looking on, I suggest to them that they resort to a much simpler step: post their concerns on this Talk page, particularly accompanied with sources to support their claims about what should or should not be on the page, when available. --Nat Gertler (talk) 23:08, 17 June 2019 (UTC)

Relax, and don’t respond. It’s just so obviously the IPv6 at the previous section trying to upset you or get you to submit to his wishes. Do t give them the satisfaction of even responding in any way; the best way to deal with TROLLs is to ignore them. See also my comments at your ANI thread. Mathglot (talk) 04:25, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

@CollegeMeltdown: I am so very certain that this is trollish nonsense, and I don’t want you to have to worry about this, that I make you the following offer: if this is still bothering you, I am happy to take over your edits. Just say the word, and I will revert all of your edits, and then I will redo them right back again to the way you had them. The end result will be that the article will be precisely the way you left it, except now *I* will be the one responsible for all the edits that the *cough* “lawyer” doesn’t like. They can then send me their fake legal threat if they wish. Depending on my mood, I will either ignore them, or laugh at them and call them names. Otherwise, just relax. The guy who sent the email is a puerile little jerk lying, bullying troll, and will soon be banned from Wikipedia if he isn’t already. (And it is a “he”.) Please don’t let this bother you, just carry on doing what you’re doing. Happy (and calm) editing! [[User:|Mathglot]] (talk) 04:46, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

@Mathglot:, thanks for the offer. I know now for certain that this is a hoaxer with an agenda. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 04:59, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

Maybe they're a graduate of the Bryant & Stratton College School of Law. EEng 05:14, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

I think it’s User:Supervisor635, blocked in September 2015. See also their sockpuppets and User:Goldarab. In which case, all those edits from Swiss IPs were block evasion. --Malcolmxl5 (talk) 05:16, 21 June 2019 (UTC)

Alumni need references

There's a long list of alumni. WP:ALUMNI says:

All alumni information must be referenced. See Wikipedia:Footnoting for technical help. Individual alumni need a citation to a) verify that they did indeed attend the school, and b) verify the statement of their notability in their short one- or two-line description. When alumni have their own articles in mainspace, it is not necessary for their notability to be referenced, as long as it is done in the biographical articles. Be sure to check the existing biography article to ensure that it demonstrates alumni status with a cited reference.

For most of those in the list, the claim that they were/are alumni is unreferenced. I thought of marking each member of this majority with "Citation needed", but at his stage doing so seems a bit "pointy". I suggest doing this one month from now, and removing those who are still unreferenced after six months. Comments? -- Hoary (talk) 13:33, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

Hoary, that sounds like a good idea. CollegeMeltdown (talk) 13:42, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

That essay doesn't describe common practice in U.S. college and university articles. We typically only insist on citations for alumni that don't have their own article that link them to the institution. In practice, nearly all alumni have their own article so it's uncommon for most inline lists of alumni to include many references. The exceptions seem to be HBCUs where editors have commonly applied an alumni list template that places the listing in a table with a column for references. (And stand-alone list articles may also be different but I haven't spent very much time editing or reading them so I'm not sure.) ElKevbo (talk) 15:37, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

I prefer the guideline to what you say is the common practice. (Why not add citations?) -- Hoary (talk) 13:31, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

ElKevbo, as I start to examine the articles on people in this list, I find none that verifiably asserts that the man (they've all been men so far) went to B&S or somewhere that later merged into B&S. Is this (admittedly small) sample unrepresentative? Is it OK to leave in names merely on the strength of some editor's say-so? -- Hoary (talk) 14:04, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

No, if the information is completely unsourced or if you have examined the sources and they don't support the assertion then you're perfectly within your rights to remove the information! My point above was simply that we're usually content to leave the details and sources in the article about an individual instead of always insisting that they also be included in their alma mater's article, too. But that's a practical shortcut that could easily be challenged and discussed or just ignored for a particular article (especially if you're willing to copy or add references for a particular embedded list of alumni). ElKevbo (talk) 17:42, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

@Hoary, CollegeMeltdown, and ElKevbo: I wasn't aware of this conversation. That being the case, I made this edit (which added references, removed entries, and tagged several more as citation needed). I think we should honestly more so be discussing breaking out the Alumni section into its own article soon. It's pretty unwieldy at the moment. –MJL ‐Talk‐^☖ 17:13, 18 June 2019 (UTC)

Once the list is referenced, it will be long, and its references will be bulky. Separating it will then be beneficial. Now, I can't see any advantage -- and separation would increase the number of articles on one's watchlist. -- Hoary (talk) 13:31, 19 June 2019 (UTC)

I've gone through the list. If the claim that somebody had gone to B&S (or a predecessor thereof) was referenced here, I took that claim at face value; I didn't investigate it. For every other person, I looked at his (and yes, it was uniformly his) Wikipedia page, to see if the claim was referenced. If it was referenced, and if I was able to check the reference, I added the reference to the list here. If I couldn't check the reference (because it wasn't on the web, or in one case was in Thai, which I can't read), or of course if there was no reference, I added the "Citation needed" flag to the item in the list here. I don't propose to do any more work on this; others are most welcome to do so. -- Hoary (talk) 12:45, 22 June 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 8 August 2019

Adding Shalrie Joseph to notable alumni. Joseph played soccer at the Syracuse campus prior to transferring to St. John's University and later becoming an MLS All Star. He is now the head coach of the Grenada National Team (per his wiki entry). Bryant & Stratton served as a jumping off point for his collegiate soccer career which eventually led him to professional success. He's by far the most notable athlete to compete for Bryant & Stratton. His time with Bryant & Stratton is noted in his official MLS bio here [1] Jcutender24 (talk) 15:24, 8 August 2019 (UTC)

@Jcutender24:  Done –MJL ‐Talk‐^☖ 19:39, 8 August 2019 (UTC)

Change in Leadership & Ancillary Updates

As of January, the President is David Vaden. College colors are wrong. The note on HCM is misleading because the issue was resolved in the 9/1/15 update. I'm not acting on behalf of the College, simply pointing out errors but I keep getting smacked around. ChrisK240 (talk) 18:45, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

I have made these noncontroversial updates to the infobox. In the future, please do not make misleading statements about your COI ('not acting on behalf of the College' when you are an employee), transparency is key. If you format your requests as explained at Template:Request_edit#How_to_use, they will be properly entered into the review list for action by neutral volunteers. Thanks in advance for your cooperation. - MrOllie (talk) 20:55, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

Timothy McVeigh?

I was brought here because I noticed the filing at Dispute Resolution, and after having driven by a sign for the school many times in my life, figured I might as well weigh in! In general, I support MrOllie's changes, though listing Timothy McVeigh as an alum feels...off to me. Technically true and reported, I don't dispute that, but the connection so far as I know was pretty brief and tenuous, such that it hits me the wrong way. My instinct would be that we should try to exercise a little extra caution with such widely reviled figures, and so, I would take that out of this article. As ever though, just my opinion, and happy to follow consensus. Cheers. Dumuzid (talk) 20:57, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

Organization Updates

• Specific text to be added or removed:

REMOVE: "Today, there are 19 physical locations and an online education division.[18] The board chair of the school is Bryant Prentice III, great-great grandson of John Collins Bryant.[19] The current president of Bryant & Stratton is Francis J. Felser, who has a doctorate from University of Phoenix.[20] and has worked in various capacities at the school for more than 25 years.[21]"

ADD: Today, there are 17 physical locations and an Online Education division.[18] The Past Board chair of the school was Bryant Prentice III, great-great grandson of John Collins Bryant.[19] The current Chair of the Board is Dr. Marie Cini. The current President of Bryant & Stratton is David Vaden, who has a M.B.A from Columbia School of Business and a B.S from St. John Fisher University. President Vaden has worked in various capacities at the school for more than 13 years.

• Reason for the change: New President, BoD Changes, Campus Closures

• References supporting change: See refs in text

ChrisKatBSC (talk) 21:58, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

I updated the president and number of campus locations - thanks! I didn't update the chair but removed the information altogether; I think it's unnecessarily detailed. ElKevbo (talk) 22:11, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

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