Talk:Broken English (album)

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Mac of Washington in topic Derek Jarman video

Language edit

Is there a reason we arent quoting the lyrics on "why'd ya do it?" not the whole lyric, just fragments, to show exactly what was said. remember, we arent censored.Mercurywoodrose (talk) 08:18, 12 December 2013 (UTC)Reply

Assessment comment edit

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 Y All the start class criteria

 Y A completed infobox, including cover art and most technical details
 Y At least one section of prose (excluding the lead section)
 Y A track listing containing track lengths and authors for all songs
 Y A full list of personnel, including technical personnel and guest musicians
 Y Categorisation at least by artist and year
 Y A casual reader should learn something about the album. Andrzejbanas (talk) 08:06, 24 June 2008 (UTC)Reply

To meet the more rigorous criteria of the revised B class, this article needs improved sourcing to help readers verify the accuracy of information. As an example, "was widely praised" by whom? Where? The only reference in the article is a primary source. Also while primary sources may be useful in such cases as (for instance) "Faithfull herself describes it in her autobiography as "the masterpiece".", citation is essential. Where does that appear in this book?
Additional improvements may also be necessary. Please see Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums/Assessment for additional information on B class in album articles. --Moonriddengirl (talk) 21:32, 19 July 2008 (UTC)Reply

Last edited at 21:32, 19 July 2008 (UTC). Substituted at 10:22, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

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Derek Jarman video edit

Should be more linked to this, maybe ? In first part of Jarman video dance features English musician Marilyn as blonde woman making love with who is we think English conceptual artist Geoff Bunn ? So those could be linked ? Maybe needs to be reasearch too better it was a long time ago. 2A01:CB05:45D:5B00:847D:4CBC:66A0:671E (talk) 19:39, 14 September 2017 (UTC) Pascal 58 (worked with Jarman)Reply

Nope. Sorry. That's not Geoff in the video, not as far as I know. (I did know him in the 80s and he didn't have any tattoos(!)) I read somewhere that he and Marilyn had a breif affair but that was a few years after the Jarman video in 1981. Maybe that is why you think it was him in the vid? But it isn't him. Mac of Washington (talk) 21:24, 30 May 2018 (UTC)Reply