Talk:Bree Condon

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Bonfire of vanities in topic Rewrite

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Stop idealizing women. Its internet encyclopedia not afamily album :). I deleted "loving family & respected (university)" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 83.28.19.172 (talkcontribs)

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This article is in need of a serious rewrite. It reads much like a fan site and the opening lines don't even explain the notability of this person. I had to read down into the text to find out why exactly she was notable. Though she does seem notable enough (per modeling websites and "celebrity" sites), nothing is referenced, and I don't have the time or effort to turn this article into something decent. So whoever wrote this, be it a friend, fan, or just someone with too much time on their hands, should note that Wikipedia is not a fansite. Zchris87v 08:14, 14 September 2007 (UTC)Reply

I've made a start on it by removing some of the unsourced material, putting the (very dubious) claim to notability at the start, and deleting the "Accomplishments" section. If anyone wants to fix it further go ahead. Bonfire of vanities (talk) 04:18, 7 September 2008 (UTC)Reply