Talk:Brandon Tanev/GA1
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 20:11, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
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edit- Could we add which high school he attended? It's East York Collegiate Institute per [1]
- Please WL 2013–14 NCAA Division I men's ice hockey season for
2013–14 Hockey East season.
- In the first paragraph under Winnipeg Jets, can you mention he played in three games. It currently reads like he just made his debut. This could likely be added in the contract sentence.
- Sentence currently reads
He joined the Jets for the final three games of the 2015–16 season, making his NHL debut on April 5, 2016.
- Sentence currently reads
- His brother Kyle also played hockey [2] but he is not mentioned
- He seems to be actively promoting the importance of mental health [3], [4], [5]
- Have you tried getting more photos for this article?
HickoryOughtShirt?4 I've addressed everything both here and at New York Yankees appearance policy, when you have a moment. — GhostRiver 19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
- GhostRiver, passing both! Sorry for the delay! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:28, 25 January 2022 (UTC)