Talk:Boys and Girls (The Office)/GA1

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Reviewer: Pedro thy master (talk · contribs) 00:42, 3 October 2012 (UTC) Great article. Just need to address some concerns and it will be done.

• This part of the article "Fischer later claimed that they talked about "shopping and shoes and our periods and sore breasts [...] haircuts and manicures and diet plans and all the things we don't gab about when the boys are in the room [and] which boys we thought were cute."[2] She ultimately concluded that they "behaved like seventh-graders."[2]". That honestly seems very trivial.

  I cut this down so that it isn't so trivial.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

• The reference that you are using for the whole cultural references section, put it at the end of each cultural reference or punctuation mark.

  The reason I didn't do this is because I'm bundling citations towards the end, that way, I don't repeat a bunch of cites; I can just place one to cover a few sentences.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

• "American legal comedy-drama television series". I would add "of the same name" at the end and link that to the show.

  Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

That is it. Congrats on a great article, just fix or explain the issues and it'll pass. I'll give it a week. --Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 00:42, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

• Corrected or explained myself. Thank you for review!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

  • Congrats. --Pedro J. ^{the rookie} 02:36, 3 October 2012 (UTC)