Talk:Boys Will Be Boys (Dua Lipa song)/GA1
Latest comment: 2 years ago by LOVI33 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- "to unlike" → "too unlike"
- "in order to" → "to" (less wordy)
- "schoolgame" should be written as two words.
- Add a comma after the first use of "Additionally".
- Remove the comma after "in the chorus".
- "kids choir" → "kids' choir" or "childrens' choir" (both times)
- Add a comma after "the first verse".
- "have have" - typo?
- Remove the hyphen between "amp-up".
- "mix crafted remix" - reword
- as "lushly orchestrated ballad" → as a "lushly orchestrated ballad"
- "songs is" → "song is"
- Sort categories in alphabetical order.
- Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:23, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: thanks for the review! I have put in place all your comments. I hope everything looks okay now. Let me know if anything else needs to be addressed. LOVI33 19:16, 18 July 2021 (UTC)