Talk:Bonza

Requested move 22 September 2023

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. (closed by non-admin page mover) ❯❯❯ Raydann^(Talk) 00:34, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

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• Bonza (airline) → Bonza
• Bonza → Bonza, Banwa Province

– The airline is definitely WP:PRIMARYTOPIC with 11k views in the last thirty days, the town on the other hand has only 100. Aydoh8 (talk) 06:31, 22 September 2023 (UTC)*

• Support, but move to Bonza, Burkina Faso, per WP:PLACEDAB. 162 etc. (talk) 14:10, 22 September 2023 (UTC)
• Comment the hatnote should be converted into Bonza (disambiguation) -- 67.70.25.175 (talk) 05:09, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Help me!

Moved from User talk:Jh15s

Please help me with... Hi there, a few parts of the article at Bonza (airline) that were written by me were removed by an editor who said I was advertising/promoting the airline and cited Wikipedia:Neutral point of view. I had a read of the Neutral point of view page and I'm still not sure how/why the removed sections could be considered advertising/promotion.

Could you have a look at the removed sections and let me know if I've done something wrong and inadvertently advertised/promoted the airline (and what rules/conventions I need to follow)? I'm just really confused as to what I did wrong here. The edits in question are: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bonza_(airline)&oldid=1177888485 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bonza_(airline)&oldid=1177888596 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bonza_(airline)&oldid=1177888748 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bonza_(airline)&oldid=1177888817

Thanks in advance! Jh15s (talk) 06:36, 1 October 2023 (UTC)

@Jh15s: To be honest, this "Bonza Holidays" program isn't really that notable or significant in the grand scheme of things. Most airlines I know of offer some sort of packaged tours and holidays and the like to its customers, e.g. Virgin Australia Holidays (apparently that shut down in 2020, but besides the point), Qantas Hotels, Qantas Cruises, Amtrak Vacations, etc. I can see why it was removed by @DaHuzyBru, I get that your edits regarding this were most likely factual, but probably Wikipedia just isn't the place for that sort of info; Wikipedia isn't a travel guide.

As for the parts of the in-flight amenities section which were also removed, I don't really think each type of seat needs its own section heading, but @DaHuzyBru might have other reasons. When you can find a secondary source (or better, multiple!) that's raving about the different types of seats, and isn't just casually mentioning the different types in passing, then maybe it might be significant enough to include in this article. The airline is all-economy anyways right, how much better can it get?

On another note, you may find it easier to link to edit diffs like this: [[Special:Diff/NUMBER]] -- it shows the changes between edits rather than just the raw text of one edit.

Hope this helps, Fork99 (talk) 09:35, 1 October 2023 (UTC)

@Fork99: Thanks for the explanation - I guess I must have gotten a bit too carried away with adding stuff and didn't really check to see whether it was necessary to include Bonza Holidays - I'll try and make sure I check if something's noteworthy enough before putting it in next time. The in-flight amenities section was based on how it's done over at the Virgin Australia and Qantas articles - both articles have short descriptions of each different type of seat as well as a summary of the food and beverage onboard and the in-flight entertainment offered so I assumed that similar information should be provided in the article here. Jh15s (talk) 09:57, 1 October 2023 (UTC)