Talk:Blood Knights/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tezero (talk) · contribs) 23:09, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Sᴠᴇɴ Mᴀɴɢᴜᴀʀᴅ Wha?

Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly. --Seabuckthorn ♥ 23:09, 6 March 2014 (UTC)

You haven't forgotten, have you? It's okay if you have to step out, but please let WP:VG know. Tezero (talk) 18:14, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Seabuckthorn has a message on his user page indicating that he's only available on the weekends. If I haven't heard from him by Monday, I'll reach back out to you Tezero. Sven Manguard Wha? 20:29, 14 March 2014 (UTC)

Tezero - The weekend has come and gone with no word from Seabuckthorn. How would I go about requesting I new reviewer? Sven Manguard Wha? 19:00, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

You'd probably just ask on WT:VG. I can just review it, though. I'll look at it now. Tezero (talk) 20:12, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Alright, so the prose is fine, and the article seems decent for the most part. It needs a screenshot, though, as well as a development section, and I think Plot could be more detailed. For development, the following articles may be helpful: [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] If you can get a solid paragraph, that's fine - just something. Tezero (talk) 21:59, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

Tezero - I put in a development section, although it focuses entirely on publication delays. What do you think of it? Sven Manguard Wha? 21:12, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, that's fine if it's all there is to write. Tezero (talk) 22:03, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Tezero - I'm not sure what to do about the plot. There really isn't that much out there on it, and I've scraped together everything I could find. A lot of XBLA/PSN games don't have terribly good coverage, and for the sake of discussion, a lot of them don't have terribly detailed plots either. As for the screenshot, I don't think that I'd be successful at getting one released - we've got very little in the way of nice things to say about the game in the article - and I would prefer not to upload non-free images. Where do you want to go from here? Sven Manguard Wha? 22:40, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

I added a screenshot. As for the plot, well, what happens at the end? Whom do they fight along the way? Does their relationship develop? You could probably watch a Let's Play, skipping through to the cutscenes and such, and summarize the plot from that. Tezero (talk) 01:53, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

I suppose that's the only way that I'd be able to do that, as none of those questions are answered in any of the sources I found. Can I source YouTube videos? Sven Manguard Wha? 06:48, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

You could cite game quotes from the videos, right? Sourcing YouTube videos isn't forbidden, but would be considered a little sketchy here. Tezero (talk) 14:10, 19 March 2014 (UTC)

Passed by Tezero - "The article passes, but I'm on my phartsmone now and making the appropriate edits is incredibly tedious on it. I'm not sure if there's a rule against this, but if not, you can just change everything to "GA" and add it to the appropriate lists yourself."