Talk:Blitz-class aviso/GA1

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Dank in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Review:

  • "ships of any time": ships of any kind? - Dank (push to talk) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "While serving as a torpedo boat flotilla leader": I'd prefer "When serving as torpedo boat flotilla leaders" or "When leading torpedo boat flotillas"
    • Fixed.
  • "speed this": this speed
    • Apparently I'm dyslexic periodically.
  • "The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts. They also carried one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.": The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts and one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.
    • Done.
  • "In 1891–1892": I'm fighting a losing battle here, but I think some readers are going to wonder what this means, if not "In 1891 and 1892". - Dank (push to talk) 20:23, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
    • Sounds fine to me.
  • Otherwise:
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
    - Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 23:40, 24 June 2013 (UTC)Reply