Talk:Blending inheritance/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:43, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Comments by Dunkleosteus77

• Are you sure ref no. 1 is cited correctly?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Formatted 'agency'.

• I'm not sure it's entirely necessary to quote Dawkins in the last paragraph of the Darwin's pangenesis section, might's well summarize what he said in a couple words   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Paraphrased.

• ref no. 10 has a free version   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Added.

• Use ISBN-13 per WP:ISBN using this   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Done.

• take a look at the formatting for ref no. 8   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Fixed.

• You might's well wikilink Johns Hopkins University Press if you're gonna do that for UC Press   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Done.

• This may be only a problem at FA, but none of the images have references which speak to their accuracy   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  14:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

Noted. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:43, 17 July 2018 (UTC)

• Looks good, it’ll pass   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  18:28, 17 July 2018 (UTC)