Talk:Black and Blue (Homicide: Life on the Street)/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Ruby2010 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 talk 04:25, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
I will review sometime today or tomorrow. Ruby2010 talk 04:25, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
edit- Misplaced period in lead's last sentence.
- There are a few instances of "police speak" that the average person might not understand, such as:
- which results in pressure from the police brass to solve the case. I had to look up "police brass" for a definition. Perhaps reword or properly wikilink it to help?
- while Pembleton plans to question him as an eyewitness, Gee demands he be treated as a subject. Does subject mean suspect?
- Just out of curiosity, did Julianna Margulies also use a body double for her music scenes, or can she really play the violin?
- Tom Shales of The Washington Post said both "Black and Blue" and "See No Evil" and were better than critically-acclaimed "Bop Gun", Sentence doesn't make sense.
- Why are the urls not provided for most of the articles referenced? Do the newspapers' archives require subscriptions to access?
- I believe I've addressed most of your above questions, although if I missed any, let me know. (Unfortunately, I don't have an answer to the Margulies question, as the source only talked about the cellist.) As far as the urls, I've accessed most of these articles through Newsbank, a newspaper article archive that I have access to through my library. In the past, I've also used Lexis for them. If you have a library account, you should check the library's website, as they might offer the service. I didn't even know mine did until fairly recently. Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn