Talk:Black (2005 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:28, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• The source for the poster links to Pinterest, a non-reliable source, so I would swap it for something else.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• That being said, the rest of the poster's non-free rationale is in excellent shape.
• I also couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
• "he meet several" → "he met several"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "to made another" → "to make another"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "written by Bhansali, Bhavani Iyer".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Principal photography of Black was done by Ravi K. Chandran in 100 days, from mid-January to April 2004, and took place in Shimla and Mumbai's film studio complex Film City. He used cinematography style from the 1959 film Kaagaz Ke Phool." → "Principal photography of Black was done by Ravi K. Chandran in 100 days, using the cinematography style from the 1959 film Kaagaz Ke Phool, from mid-January to April 2004, taking place in Film City, Shimla and Mumbai's film studio complex."

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "budget around" → "budget of around"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "With a total grossing" → "With a total gross"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Best Actor for Bachchan".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• "after recovered" → "after recovering"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Debraj (an elderly alcoholic teacher) enters" → "Debraj, an elderly alcoholic teacher, enters"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "when he see" → "when he sees"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "back to be insolent" → "back to being insolent"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• I'm not sure whether Indian English uses the ending "se" or "ze", but if its the second one, change "recognise" to "recognize" and "vocalise" to "vocalize".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• "a expressive woman, and is even able to dance" → "an expressive woman who is even able to dance"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• Plot section is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• No issues with cast.

Production

• "Hindi film ever" → "Hindi films ever"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "he would quoted" → "he would say"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "In an interview to" → "In an interview with"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "inspired from" → "inspired by"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "As a gratitude" → "As gratitude"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Bachchan take a hiatus" → "Bachchan took a hiatus"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "To prepare his part" → "To prepare for his part"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "a special training" → "special training"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "he did an extensive research" → "he did extensive research"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "what happen" → "what happens"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "physical disability" → "physical disabilities"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "an theatre actress" → "a theatre actress"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "produced, financed".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "sure for it" → "sure about it"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "lot monochromatic" → "lot of monochromatic"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "khaki".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "between 1950s" → "between the 1950s"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "were chose" → "were chosen"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "highest-paid actors in Bollywood".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "film in his career" → "films in his career"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "he shoot a film" → "he shot a film"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "promised to collaborated" → "promised to collaborate"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "filmed is the" → "filmed was the"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Mukerji stretch out her hand when snow starts to fall" → "Mukerji stretching out her hand when snow begins to fall"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Media reported" → "The media reported"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "would ended" → "would end"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "mostly of the set" → "most of the set"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "resulting a shooting" → "resulting in a shooting"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "for did not return 390" → "for not returning 390"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Deputy Chief Minister" → "the Deputy Chief Minister"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Soundtrack

• "Armenian instrument" → "the Armenian instrument"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Release

• "film had a good" → "film had good"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "was coincided" → "coincided"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "28 August 2009 in" → "28 August 2009 on"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "a non-Korean films" → "a non-Korean film"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Black has been screened" → "Black was screened"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• "Prime Video since" → "Prime Video in"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Critical reception

• "mostly critics" → "most critics"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Bhansali's direction".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Box office

• Add a comma after "the Netherlands".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Accolades

• "win the all four" → "win all four"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Best Actor".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:34, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• Run this tool to archive sources.

External links

• The link to Rotten Tomatoes is unnecessary per WP:ELRC.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• Change the current link to Box Office Mojo to this.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:13, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

• The "Films by Sanjay Leela Bhansali" should go on top.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:03, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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