Talk:BlackRock/Archives/2015
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Meatsgains in topic Promo Lingo
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Schwarzman
The surname appears without a firstname. I thought we only did that for musicians, like Cher, Bono and Madonna.
Promo Lingo
Just removed some blatantly peacock promotional/PR language from the History section. Clear violation of WP:PROMO. Not having an inline citation to work with, I interpreted the peacock talk into more down to earth language. If anyone can do it better in the same spirit/intention, please do. I'm also intending to tag the article as not having enough inline citations, especially for the History section. Tapered (talk) 21:12, 22 December 2015 (UTC)
- @Tapered: I agree, the History section needs far more inline citiations for support. If I can find the time, I'll go through and try and find reliable sources. Meatsgains (talk) 22:41, 22 December 2015 (UTC)
- I'm actually having a tough time finding sources verifying the content in the History section. While I don't necessarily think we should remove it, we may have to cut it back some until we can find references. Thoughts? Meatsgains (talk) 23:12, 22 December 2015 (UTC)