Talk:Birds-1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Kees08 in topic GA Review
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May 8, 2018Good article nomineeListed
July 7, 2018Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 00:47, 7 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Mention Japan's involvement in the lead.
  • "Nigeria has a background with satellites," Nigerian engineers and scientists?
    • More the government, since they contracted it out. Changed to that. Kees08 (Talk)
  • "Sometimes MongolSat-1 is referred to as Mongolia's first satellite, but it was launched by Bermuda-based company ABS and built by U.S. company Boeing. It was co-branded as MongolSat-1 after launch. Birds-1 successfully launched the first satellite for Bangladesh, Ghana, Mongolia, and Nigeria." [citation needed]
  • "as part of the Joint Global Multi-Nation Birds Satellite project, which is a cross-border interdisciplinary satellite project for non-spacefaring countries supported by Japan" No need to mention the project twice.
  • "The satellites communicate with seven ground stations: one in each of the countries participating in the Birds-1 program, and one each in Thailand and Taiwan. The satellites all use the same radio frequency." Make sure no consecutive sentences start with the same words.
  • Link the countries in the Future work section.
  • Dates are not consistent in the references.
  • Jack Fischer's tweet ref should include his name, link to his article, and tweet inside the title of the text. Look at the {{Cite tweet}}'s example section.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:31, 7 May 2018 (UTC)Reply