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Latest comment: 16 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion
This article is horribly written. It is not suppose to be a biography it is suppose to be an encyclopedia article. Major - major - revision is needed. Omegablackbelt (talk) 23:32, 13 March 2008 (UTC)Reply
It was reverted to its original stub form. The additions were apparently made by Bill Edwards' daughter, who was unaware of the necessities of citation, form, and so forth. I hope that the experience doesn't deter her from adding to the article once she gets herself better acquainted with Wikipedia prose and policies. 147.70.242.40 (talk) 00:24, 21 March 2008 (UTC)Reply
