Talk:Big Church Festival

Latest comment: 2 years ago by LittleFuzzyYeeks in topic Edited to improve tone

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COI tag (June 2021) edit

Article contents have been largely recreated by editor who appears to be connected with the event in question. DoubleGrazing (talk) 05:26, 15 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

Edited to improve tone edit

Have attempted to reword to improve the article. Removed "to appeal to all denominations of Christians. The main musical genres featured are" and edited to try to improve the tone so that it sounds less like an advertisement, and more neutral. Also removed "famous" descriptor from band listing, and reworded to also try to improve tone. I'm not sure if these changes are sufficient as yet for the removal of the "multiple issues" tag. Hope these changes improve the article at least LittleFuzzyYeeks (talk) 14:09, 17 April 2022 (UTC)Reply