Talk:Bianca Comparato

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Whatqnavry in topic Wrong language
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Wrong language

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The language in this article is awful. Some of it seems machine translated. Example:

Comparato was in the feature film starring Como Esquecer How Ana Paula Arósio

> "How" must be "as". (Braz. "como")

in the episode "A Culpada de BH" in the series As Brasileiras,[27] will be on the soap opera Avenida Brasil of João Emanuel Carneiro, in the novel she interprets the attendant Betânia.

> "will be on" - is that a mistake for "sería"? "Novel" is a book in English (telenovela = soap opera/daytime TV).

Sentences are awkward and many verbs are inadequate. Whatqnavry (talk) 12:43, 22 July 2019 (UTC)Reply