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The lead (introduction) needs to be expanded. ChildofMidnight (talk) 18:27, 9 June 2009 (UTC)Reply

Discussion of account by Christopher Andrew

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Several dates relating to Andrew's book are included in the Floud article. They are obviously wrong (2006 was long after Floud's death) but having no first-hand or even second-hand knowledge of the events described, I will leave them for another person to alter. The article needs considerable editing by someone well-informed. Harfarhs (talk) 20:42, 13 April 2010 (UTC)Reply