Talk:Bernard Fantus

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I made a few small edits on the page (mainly adding or removing spaces, and spelling corrections).

"Knowing that medication in the form of candy would be best for children, Fantus studied candy confection and worked with candy-makers in order to determine that "sweet tablets" would be the best way to administer medicine to kids in a candy form." <-- I would reword this sentence. It makes it sound like candy is best for children, which I don't think is exactly what you meant.

"In order to make sweet tablets, one needs a tablet machine. Fantus recommends the No. 25 Machine from the Whitall Tatum Company, which, at the time, was effective and inexpensive at only ten dollars." <-- a better way to write this might be "Fantus' preferred tablet maker was the No. 25 Machine from the Whitall Tatum Company, which was both effective and inexpensive at only ten dollars".

"In 1915, Fantus published a book called Candy Medication. Through his book, Fantus sought to make sweet tablets common place by giving pharmacists and physicians a guide book of sorts." <-- rewrite, perhaps like this "In 1915, Fantus published Candy Medication, a guide-book to easily palatable children's medication for pharmacists and physicians. Through this book, Fantus sought to make sweet tablets common-place." --limulus120 19:51, 4 May 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Clara.roeder (talk • contribs)

I would also remove sections that you haven't filled out yet. I don't know if you are planning to Fantus for the second midterm assignment, but it would be good to keep them in your sandbox and fill them out before inserting them into Wikipedia. -- limulus120 20:06, 4 May 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Clara.roeder (talk • contribs)