Talk:Benny Lefebvre/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 02:29, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:29, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

The image is appropriately tagged and has a decent FUR. Sources are reliable.

• The article is only 1,170 words, and about 10-15% of them are quotes. There are about twenty quotes, many of which could be paraphrased quite easily. This is overquoting; I think the quotes need to be significantly reduced before I can pass this as a GA.

-- Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 02:51, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

• Could you show me what quotes you think need to be removed/rephrased? Thanks. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:38, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

  It's not any particular quote, it's the total number and size of them. Any one of the quotes would be fine if it were the only one you used. I think you should cut out more than half of the quotes you have, both by number of quotes and number of words, but it doesn't matter particularly which ones you pick. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:36, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

  I now count 10 sentences with quotes. Is that low enough or do you want me to trim the quotes further? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:41, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

  That's much better; thanks. I'll read through again now. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 16:44, 20 August 2022 (UTC)

Looks good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:00, 20 August 2022 (UTC)