Talk:Benjamin Schulte/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing this as part of a GA sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 07:58, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
General edit
- All mentions of events such as 50 m and 100 m, 400 m would be better off spelt out as 50 meters for example
Lead edit
- "He competed at the 2012 Summer Olympics in the Men's 10 kilometre Open Water event," - link Men's 10 kilometre Open Water to Swimming at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's marathon 10 kilometre and do the same for when it is mentioned in the main body
- "where he placed 25th out of 25." - where he placed last of all participants.
Early life and education edit
- "Benjamin Schulte was born December 22, 1995, in Tamuning, Guam." - reword to Benjamin Schulte was born in the Guam city of Tamuning on December 22, 1995.
- "He attended Miami State High School, located in Gold Coast, Australia." - He attended Miami State High School in Queensland's Gold Coast.
Olympic career edit
- "Schulte decided to refocus and switch from long distance swimming to short distance. " - link long distance swimming
- "Schulte broke his own national record during the" - wikilink national record to List of Guamanian records in swimming
- The wikilink for the 2016 Summer Olympics should be at the start of the first sentence of the third paragraph and not at the end of it
International career edit
Overall a neater piece of work than the other two articles I've reviewed. Just the quibbles above will need addressing. MWright96 (talk) 12:04, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96: Done with the comments, let me know if you have more. Thanks! Kees08 (Talk) 06:52, 19 April 2018 (UTC)